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- 1 Wikipedia has article with same title
- 2 Really ready for approval
- 3 Approved Version 1.0
- 4 Approval Notice
- 5 Approval Process: Approval certified
- 6 Trying to understand 'boiling point' from a undergraduate student perspective--To Milton
- 7 Target audience
- 8 It has now been almost 3 months since the new approval process started
- 9 Approval mechanics
Wikipedia has article with same title
I was one of the major contributors to the WP article. However, I have completely revised and reformatted the article in my sandbox before I created this CZ version. - Milton Beychok 23:11, 9 June 2008 (CDT)
Really ready for approval
Just one thing occurred to me, and it may not be worth mentioning.
Should any reference be made to sublimation/sublimation point? It's related, but not strictly part of an article dealing with liquids boiling. IIRC, some substances that sublime under standard pressure will boil under higher pressure.
It's your call if that's too minor a point; I'm otherwise ready to recommend approval. I hadn't realized you had so many articles at that point.
Howard C. Berkowitz 20:40, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
- Hi, Howard: If you will look at the Vapor pressure article I created some time ago, you will see that the sublimation point is defined and discussed in the section entitled "Vapor pressure of solids". I really don't think that discussion needs to be repeated in this article. However, a Sublimation point that redirects to the Vapor pressure article should help readers navigate to where sublimation points are discussed ... so I will create that redirect in the next few minutes. Happy New Year! Milton Beychok 21:06, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
- Howard, as for how many articles I've written, just checkout my user page. Milton Beychok 21:06, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
- LOL...occasionally, I have put a list on my userpage, but don't keep it updated. How's that for going from the sublimation to the ridiculous? I'll go ahead with the approval on BP.Howard C. Berkowitz 22:30, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
Approved Version 1.0
Hi all, I am here to perform the approval tasks and noticed that Joe has added a copyedit that might be perceived as a content edit, depending how it is read. I am actually only able to approve to the date that Howard placed on the template which is December 27, 2008 anyway, but if you would like me to include that change,let me know and I can do it later. Meanwhile I will approve without that change. D. Matt Innis 00:09, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
- It's truly a copy edit. Go ahead and approve.
Fillet of a fenny snake, In the cauldron at BOILING POINT and bake; Eye of newt, and toe of frog, Wool of bat, and tongue of dog, Adder's fork, and blind-worm's sting, Lizard's leg, and owlet's wing,— For a charm of powerful trouble, Like a hell-broth boil and bubble. ALL. Double, double toil and trouble; Fire burn, and caldron bubble.
Howard C. Berkowitz 00:27, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
- Just a couple of very minor grammar edits. I can add them into the Draft article after you finish the approval. I agree with Howard ... go ahead and approve. Milton Beychok 00:46, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
- Okay, will do. I just couldn't make that decision because they could potentially changed the meaning and needed your okay. Howard is cooking up something sinister for sure ;-) D. Matt Innis 00:58, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
Approval Process: Approval certified
Call for review: Milton Beychok 21:09, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
Call for Approval: Peter Schmitt 01:04, 22 December 2011 (UTC)
Approval Notice: 03:29, 1 March 2012 Anthony.Sebastian
Please discuss the article below, Boiling point/Approval is for brief official referee's only!
I think the lede has it backwards. It defines boiling point in terms of vapour pressure, then says it may also be defined as the temperature at which the phase change happens. No. It is by definition the temperature at which the liquid boils. Several more precise definitions are possible, either in terms of phase change or vapour pressure.
There's a general principle here, Progressing from simple to complex is better style and makes for easier reading. Sandy Harris 01:28, 22 December 2011 (UTC)
- Sandy, your statement "It is by definition the temperature at which the liquid boils" leads one to believe that a liquid has one single boiling point. However, there is no single temperature at which a liquid boils. There are an infinite number of boiling points since the boiling point changes with the surrounding environmental pressure. That is why it is more accurate to define the boiling point in terms of the liquid's vapor pressure being equal to the surrounding environmental pressure.
- The only single boiling point of note is the "normal boiling point" which is the special case at which the boiling point occurs when the liquid's vapor pressure equals a surrounding environmental pressure of 1 atmosphere (101.325 kilopascals). That is the boiling point that most lay people think of as being "the" boiling point ... but that is not correct, since a liquid has an infinite number of boiling points. Milton Beychok 18:24, 22 December 2011 (UTC)
- I see. But this leads to another suggestion: Your explanation why the "naive" definition is not good enough should be added to the article. (I could try, but it is probably better that you do it?) --Peter Schmitt 22:36, 22 December 2011 (UTC)
- Good idea, Peter. I have now expanded the lede to include the discussion of infinite boiling points as you suggested. Milton Beychok 23:54, 22 December 2011 (UTC)
- With regard to Sandy's comment I have mentioned the non-scientific definition of boiling point. Is this ok, Milt? --Peter Schmitt 11:57, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
- Peter, I don't find your edit objectional even though I don't think it was needed, so I left it as you edited it.Milton Beychok 17:06, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
- You are certainly right that it is not needed (from a logical or scientific view). The idea is to help readers who might otherwise be confused. --Peter Schmitt 17:45, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
Reference 1 needs updating. (This shows the limited value of references to web resources -- they are quite volatile.) --Peter Schmitt 11:40, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
- Peter, I replaced that inactive hyperlink reference to a website with a book reference. Also added another book reference for good measure. Milton Beychok 17:06, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
- In the explanations, ln should be roman as in the formula. I don't know how to change this.
- Preferably, vap should be roman too.
- The notation for inverse units is inconsistent.
Peter Jackson 10:50, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
- You are correct and, in the listed parameters of the equation, I changed "ln" to Roman font.
- I disagree with you on this. I believe that all of the listed parameters should look the same as in the equation itself.
- I revised the notation of the units for the heat of vaporization to be consistent with those of the molar gas constant.
- Thanks for your comments, Peter Jackson. Milton Beychok 16:58, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
- Perhaps I misunderstood your item 2 and you meant changing "vap" to Roman font in the equation as well as in the listed parameters. On that basis, I agree and have made that change. Thanks again. Milton Beychok 18:34, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, that was what I meant. Peter Jackson 11:21, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
.......I copied comment and response from Milton Beychok's Talk page to here at his request on my Talk page.
- Milt, since you're one of the main writers of the Boiling point/Draft page, I must say that I expanded this page by adding two more sections, before it went through re-approval. I still would like to expand it a little further, including mentioning azeotropes and adding a new section on experimental "Boiling point determination" in a lab setting, which I have yet to write or even research. Henry A. Padleckas 00:23, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks, Henry. I agree that a section on "Boiling point determination" in a laboratory setting would be useful. However, I think that azeotropes deserve a separate, stand-alone article. Milton Beychok 15:45, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
Trying to understand 'boiling point' from a undergraduate student perspective--To Milton
Milton, does the following, serving only as an introductory paragraph, correctly and coherently represent the facts? I want to be sure I understand 'boiling point'.
As the temperature of a liquid increases with the application of heat to it, the pressure of the vapor escaping from the liquid and exerting back on and throughout the liquid increases. When the temperature has increased to a point at which bubbles of vapor (gas) begin to form within the bulk of the liquid, that temperature is referred to as the liquid’s boiling point. At temperatures below the boiling point, the total external pressure exerted on the liquid exceeds that portion of it contributed by the pressure of the liquid’s vapor, thereby constraining vaporization within the liquid's bulk. When the rising temperature increases the vapor pressure to equal the total external pressure exerted on the liquid—a pressure transmitted through the bulk of the liquid— the liquid within its bulk is no longer constrained from vaporizing by pressure and then can begin to vaporize within its bulk, and bubbles of vapor can then begin to form.
Anthony.Sebastian 18:55, 15 February 2012 (UTC)
- Tony, I'm pleased that you are now our active Approval Manager. First, as an example, please look at the plot of liquid diethyl ether's vapor pressure versus temperature on the vapor pressure chart included in this article. Every point on that graphed line is a boiling point. Since the line has an infinite number of points, then the liquid has an infinite number of boiling points. It is most important that students (undergrad or otherwise) understand that there is no singular boiling point which is "the" boiling point of a liquid. That's why the first sentence of this article's introduction defines a liquid boiling point as "the temperature at which the vapor pressure of the liquid equals the external environmental pressure surrounding the liquid."
- Your wording includes this: "... that temperature is referred to as the liquid’s boiling point." That wording might lead students to believe that a liquid has only a singular boiling point referred to as "the liquid's boiling point", which would be incorrect.
- Also, other than in a laboratory or a kitchen, boiling very often occurs in an enclosed, non-transparent vessel and therefore the bubbles formed during boiling cannot be observed. Discussing bubble formation in the first introductory paragraph would be a mistake in my opinion. That's why most of your proposed wording is discussed in this article's second paragraph, namely: "The boiling point of a liquid may also be defined as the temperature at which it changes state from a liquid to a gas throughout the bulk of the liquid. At that point, bubbles of vapor which form below the surface of the liquid contain vapor at a pressure which matches the external pressure. Therefore, they are not crushed by the surrounding liquid and their buoyancy causes them to rise through to the surface of the liquid and give the familiar appearance of a boiling liquid."
- References 1 is an introductory chemistry textbook in its 4th edition. Hence, it must have proven its worth as a textbook for undergrad students. This is a quote from that reference: A boiling point is the temperature at which the vapor pressure of the liquid becomes equal to the external pressure exerted on the liquid."
- In summary, I believe that the current wording of this article's introductory paragraphs should remain as is. Regards, Milton Beychok 03:35, 16 February 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks, Milton, I do appreciate your clarification. I was writing more for myself than to suggest a new lede. I do understand that a liquid's boiling point differs depending on ambient pressure, as I have tried cooking spaghetti at altitude. My thought, for the undergraduate, was to bring in that qualification next.
- What induced me to try writing it for my own understanding was a problem I encountered with the first sentence you wrote: "The boiling point of a liquid is the temperature at which the vapor pressure of the liquid equals the external environmental pressure surrounding the liquid." For the naive student, the sentence explains one concept, boiling point, in terms of another concept, vapor pressure, that the student might be unfamiliar with, forcing her to quit her quest to understand 'boiling point' until she first turned to learning what is meant by 'vapor pressure'. And I did not feel that knowing 'vapor pressure', from the CZ article, as
Vapor pressure (also known as equilibrium vapor pressure), is the pressure of a vapor in equilibrium with its liquid or solid phase. At any given temperature, for a specific substance, there is a pressure at which the gas of that specific substance is in dynamic equilibrium with its liquid or solid forms. This is the vapor pressure of the specific substance at that temperature.
- then gave the student a beginning understanding of 'boiling point'. I thought to approach explaining 'boiling point' in a way that obviates the student's need to first come to grips with 'vapor pressure' as a separate concept, rather letting it emerge to the extent needed to understand boiling point. I didn't do a very good job.
- Anyway, I appreciate the opportunity to discuss the matter with you. Anthony.Sebastian 05:22, 16 February 2012 (UTC)
- Good point, Tony. I also struggled with the fact that a reader might not know what is meant by "vapor pressure". After considerable thought, I came to the conclusion that we are a wiki for the very reason that it enables us to provide links to other articles explaining the underlying concepts. There just is no way to write an article on boiling points that will also explain what is meant by "vapor pressure", what is meant by "temperature", what is meant by "pressure", what is the "difference between a liquid and a gas", etc., etc., etc. However, a wiki does enable us to send the reader to other articles explaining those underlying concepts. Another alternative is to write a textbook of 400 pages or so instead of writing an encyclopedia article.
- This same conundrum applies in other fields. For example, how does one write a mathematics article involving some concept in calculus or differential equations without assuming that the reader "understands algebra", knows how to perform "arithmetic functions", etc., etc., etc.? Again, a wiki enables us to direct readers to other articles that will explain those underlying mathematical concepts. Milton Beychok 06:21, 16 February 2012 (UTC)
- Of course, you are right about our being a wiki, able to send the student to another page to look up things he doesn't know. Yet, that's a generalization. In this particular case, we can appreciate a big difference between the more basic concepts of 'temperature', 'pressure', 'liquid', and 'gas'—your examples—and the less familiar and more advanced concept of 'vapor pressure'. I do not see a particular problem defining 'boiling point' in terms of those more basic concepts. A student who didn't have a basic understanding of 'temperature', 'pressure', 'liquid', and 'gas' will soon discover that she needs to go back and learn the basics before trying to understand 'boiling point'.
- This is just my opinion: We should do whatever it takes to teach the student about 'boiling point' without requiring her to figure it out for herself after finding out what 'vapor pressure' means, a task that will not be very easy, I suspect, considering how 'vapor pressure' is defined (i.e., as equilibrium vapor pressure). It might be a challenge to introduce the concept of 'boiling point' without requiring the student first study up on 'vapor pressure', but think that challenge could be met.
- Nevertheless, what you have written is correct, scientifically. No one said science is easy. I'm happy to defer to your judgement in this matter.
- Thanks, again, for the opportunity to engage this issue with you. Anthony.Sebastian 05:39, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
(Unindent)Tony, at the risk of over-talking this, let me make another point and a fairly subtle one. The current lede states that the boiling point of a liquid varies with the "surrounding environmental pressure" rather than with the "ambient pressure". That was done deliberately because the "ambient pressure" is often taken to mean the outdoors atmospheric pressure.
A closed storage tank full of liquid propane, for example, is not subject to the outdoor "ambient pressure". The "surrounding environmental pressure" inside that tank is the vapor pressure of propane at the temperature of the stored liquid within the tank. By either cooling or heating the stored liquid, the "surrounding environmental pressure" within the tank is lowered or raised. The point I hope to make with this is that it is unwise to use the words that "the boiling point of a liquid varies with the ambient pressure" ... because that can be misconstrued. Even some of this article's references use that poorly chosen wording of "ambient pressure". That is just one example of why I believe that the primary recourse to be taken in science articles is to be as scientifically correct as possible. Yes, that may make it difficult for some undergrad students or unknowledgeable readers. On the other hand, if the article is not scientifically correct, then it may confuse graduate students or knowledgeable readers. Milton Beychok 06:34, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
Boiling point is a concept that most people on this planet experience every single day of their lives, and most of them are capable of describing it in simple terms. If Citizendium is not then it is not the fault of boiling point.
I wonder if anyone stops to consider the target audience when writing these articles. Not the current audience, which would be ourselves, but the audience we might attract if we were a successful encyclopedia. We should be wary of articles written by experts for experts, which more suitably belong on a subpage of a main article. David Finn 07:53, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
- David, this is in response to your above comments about the Boiling point article discussion between Anthony Sebastian and myself. Yes, you are correct that many people on the planet can describe the boiling that they can easily see in their kitchens ... boiling that takes place when water is heated at a typical atmospheric pressure of 14.696 pounds per square inch (101.325 kilopascals). That is what is called the "normal boiling point" of a liquid, as clearly explained in the Boiling point article, and that is only one of water's infinite number of boiling points.
- But I very much doubt that many people on the planet can see or understand that boiling is also taking place in the refrigeration unit on the back of their kitchen's refrigerator. In that unit, the refrigerant liquid (which is not water) is constantly being boiled (evaporated) into its gas phase at a pressure which is not atmospheric pressure. That gas is then compressed and cooled to convert it again into a liquid ... which is then boiled again, etc., etc. The same process is also taking place in their home's air conditioning unit if they have one. (See Vapor-compression refrigeration)
- I also very much doubt that many people on the planet when driving by an oil refinery and seeing the tall vessels, 100 to 300 feet high (30 to 90 meters high), are aware that boiling is constantly taking place within those vessels in order to produce the gasoline for the cars they are driving. In most cases, the boiling in those oil refinery vessels is not taking place at atmospheric pressure. In some of those vessels, boiling is taking place at pressures very, very much higher than atmospheric pressure. In other of those vessels, boiling is taking place under vacuum conditions much, much lower than atmospheric pressure.(See Continuous distillation and Theoretical plate)
- I also very much doubt that people using small tanks of pressurized propane/butane liquid (LPG, or liquefied petroleum gas) for cooking understand that the liquid in such tanks is instantaneously boiled (flashed) into a gas when the tank valve is opened and the released liquid's surrounding environmental pressure is suddenly reduced. (See Flash evaporation)
- The point I am trying to make above is that boiling water in the kitchen is only a very, very tiny part of the boiling point story.
- Students in the United States currently rank about 14th in reading and 17th in science compared to students world-wide. That is disgraceful. It is due in part to the fact that we do not respect our school teachers enough nor do we pay them well. However, it is also due in large part to the fact that we always try to simplify our students' education rather than challenging them to thoroughly understand what they are studying. The point I am making is that perhaps making concepts simple is unwise ... and we should always describe scientific concepts so as to preserve their scientific integrity. As for reading and writing, our youngsters have created a language of their own ... it is called "texting" on their smart phones. Think about that for a moment ... they have used "smart" phones to create a "dumbed down" language of their own where capitalization is not used and where "your" becomes "ur".
- Do we really want to "dumb down" our articles on CZ?? That is not how men landed on the Moon nor is it how a tunnel underneath the North Sea was designed to connect England and Europe. Milton Beychok 17:54, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
- I fully agree with Milt. There is no use in telling the reader what he already knows (or rather: thinks that he knows). An (expert guided) encyclopedia has to stay scientifically correct. It has to do this as "simple" as possible (but not simpler).
- Anthony writes (in the previous section):
- "We should do whatever it takes to teach the student about 'boiling point' without requiring her to figure it out for herself ..."
- But there is no "learning" without the need of "figuring out" (neither in humanities nor -- in particular -- in science). Learning without thinking is only learning by heart. A useful encyclopedia has to provoke thought and to support thinking as well as possible.
- No dumbing down! --Peter Schmitt 23:56, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
- Peter, your truncation of my sentence misses the point I was trying to make about the particular case of 'boiling point', makes it appear I was proposing a generalization. The full sentence:
- "We should do whatever it takes to teach the student about 'boiling point' without requiring her to figure it out for herself after finding out what 'vapor pressure' means, a task that will not be very easy, I suspect, considering how 'vapor pressure' is defined (i.e., as equilibrium vapor pressure)."
- I absolutely subscribe to scientific accuracy, but concurrently subscribe to pedagogical effectiveness, even if that means starting a topic with a simplification that facilitates the learner understanding the a fuller scientific exposition that follows. I do not believe that requires 'dumbing down' the topic, as every example Milton mentions regarding 'boiling point' can and should be covered in the article, with building complexity. Anthony.Sebastian 03:05, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
- Peter, your truncation of my sentence misses the point I was trying to make about the particular case of 'boiling point', makes it appear I was proposing a generalization. The full sentence:
- Well said Anthony. That is why this is an encyclopedia and not a chemistry textbook. David Finn 14:44, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
- Anthony, I am sorry that you feel misinterpreted. I did not cite the whole sentence (ending it with dots) because my point did not depend on to what particular concept the "figuring out" was referring to. I wanted to emphasize (quite generally) that there always will be something left for the student to figure out (and that this is healthy). As for "vapor pressure": Knowing and at least vaguely understanding this term is a prerequisite for understanding the topic of the article, therefore readers who are not familiar with that concept should read about it first.
- With regard to your criticism of the introduction, I suspect (from the "first sentence" you cite) that -- accidently -- you didn't read the new draft but the currently approved version? --Peter Schmitt 23:40, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
@Peter: What kind of "expert" quotes people out of context? David Finn 14:44, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
- I have to say I find some of this rather puzzling. The lay person's approach would be
- the definition of boiling point is the temperature at which a liquid boils
- all the other things are facts about the boiling point: vapour pressure, variability etc.
- Some of these facts are important enough to appear immediately after the definition, of course.
- So I ask Milton whether scientists really take a different approach. Peter Jackson 09:51, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
(unindent)Peter Jackson, any liquid has an infinite number of boiling points. Take water for example:
- water boils at 10 °C when the surrounding environmental pressure is 9.2 mm of mercury (a very low vacuum pressure)
- it also boils at 50 °C when the surrounding environmental pressure is 93.5 mm of mercury (a moderately low vacuum)
- it also boils at 100 °C when the surrounding environmental pressure is 760.0 mm of mercury (normal atmospheric pressure)
- it also boils at 150 °C when the surrounding environmental pressure is 3,570.5 mm of mercury (4.7 times normal atmospheric pressure)
- it also boils at 200 °C when the surrounding environmental pressure is 11,659.2 mm of mercury (15.34 times normal atmospheric pressure)
- it also boils at 300 °C when the surrounding environmental pressure is 64,432.8 mm of mercury (84.78 times normal atmospheric pressure)
If I made the temperature increments smaller and smaller and smaller (ad infinitum), the number of boiling points would be more and more and more (ad infinitum). Rather than doing that, as I have reiterated many times during this discussion, any liquid (not just water) has an infinite number of boiling points. When one states a boiling point temperature, one must also state the surrounding environmental pressure. Thus, most chemists, physicists and engineers would define the boiling point of any liquid as the temperature at which the vapor pressure of the liquid is equal to the surrounding environmental pressure.
Read references 1 and 3 for yourself and see how modern chemistry textbooks define liquid boiling points. That is what references are for.
As for your specific question about whether scientists really take a different approach, the primary approach of most chemists, physicists and engineers is to be as accurate as they can be in their descriptions and definitions of physical phenomena.
By the way, Peter, I am not a scientist and I do not have a Master's degree nor a PhD. I was a chemical engineer and I obtained an undergraduate B.S. degree in Chemical Engineering 66 years ago. My education occurred during the 1930s and early 1940s ... and we learned what was meant by an "infinite number of .." and by "vapor pressure" in high school math and chemistry classes before we entered a university. Milton Beychok 17:36, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
- The revised introduction quite clearly explains why the "naive" approach is not sufficient. --Peter Schmitt 23:10, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
- I'm perfectly well aware of the variability of boiling point, as I would put it as a mathematician. I wouldn't talk about an infinite number of boiling points, though that's true enough, of course. Boiling point varies with the liquid and also with the surrounding pressure. Peter Jackson 14:18, 21 February 2012 (UTC)
- Anthony's asked me for further comments, but I'm not sure I'm in a position to give any. I'm not an expert in this subject, my qualifications not going beyond physics A level. Milton refers me to a couple of books I don't know whether I'll take the time to look up. I'd just point out that most of his comment is directed to something I hadn't said, and my comment immediately above this is a response to that. My original comment was about distinguishing between predicables. Milton's reply doesn't explicitly address that, though it may do so implicitly. Peter Jackson 11:07, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
- Peter, I have added this sentence to the first paragraph: "At a given surrounding pressure, each liquid will have its own unique boiling point temperature.". As for your comment above, namely "I wouldn't talk about an infinite number of boiling points, though that's true enough, of course.", I disagree quite strongly. It is most important that readers understand that a liquid has an infinite number of boiling points since most lay people assume that a liquid has only one boiling point ... the one they can see in their kitchen. Milton Beychok 17:46, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
- You've taken my remark out of context. I said immediately before that I would say instead that bp is variable. More specifically that it varies with pressure (and of course the liquid in question).
- So now you are requesting the reader to understand what "variable" means to a trained mathematician. I would rather spell it out to the reader and emphasize the fact that liquids have many different boiling points and why that is so ... as I have done. Milton Beychok 20:59, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
- I've just looked up a couple of authorities. One of them has the definition the article has. The other, McGraw-Hill Encyclopedia of Science and Technology, 9th ed, volume 3, 2002, page 192, says
The boiling point of a liquid is the temperature at which the liquid and vapor phases are in equilibrium with each other at a specified pressure. Therefore, the boiling point is the temperature at which the vapor pressure of the liquid is equal to the applied pressure on the liquid.
- Thus what some authorities give as the definition is treated by others as a property derived from a different definition. (That means of course that the two, or indeed three, definitions are equivalent in some sense.) I'm not siure how CZ is supposed to deal with things like that. Peter Jackson 18:36, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
- Peter, thanks for finding that one of your authorities has the same definition as this article has. That quote from your second source of "Therefore, the boiling point is the temperature at which the vapor pressure of the liquid is equal to the applied pressure on the liquid." is essentially what is said in the current introductory paragraph except that it says "... environmental pressure surrounding" instead of " ...applied pressure". Surely you can see that both of those wordings are essentially the same. If you cannot see that, then I give up. Milton Beychok 19:53, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
- You still don't seem to be getting the distinction I'm making between a definition of bp and a fact about it. What one source gives as the definition the other treats as a fact deduced from a different definition. Peter Jackson 10:23, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
- You are right, Peter, I do have trouble getting my head around that distinction. In the context of this article, it is an esoteric/abstruse/arcane distinction and, in my opinion, it isn't worth worrying about. Milton Beychok 17:33, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
- And of course an Editor's opinion is what counts here. Peter Jackson 10:27, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
It has now been almost 3 months since the new approval process started
We seem to have completely discarded the original defining purpose of CZ, namely that it was to develop an expert guided encyclopedia. It has now been almost 3 months since the re-approval process of this article began on December 10th, 2011 ... that is more than enough time in which to arrive at a decision.
I have done my very best to respond to all comments made during those 3 months. I will make no further responses to any further comments. It is too time consuming to keep this up.
Anthony, please make your decision within the next few days. If you cannot do that, then I will regretfully ask that the official call for review made on December 10th, 2011 be rescinded. Milton Beychok 18:05, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
- Milton, see my response to your note on my Talk page. —Anthony.Sebastian 20:19, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
- Milton, do try to be a little realistic. The approval process was in abatement and the approval manager flown the coop for two and a half months of your three month period, with Anthony only becoming involved the last two weeks. Now that we actually have a working approval manager it would be better to encourage them rather than not. Also, you have made less than 20 edits to this page during the three month period, less than a third of an edit per day, so you haven't had to devote your life to it.
- Some of us may have completely discarded the original defining purpose of CZ, but not in the way you think. There is a big difference between expert guided and expert written, with the former more likely to produce articles accessible to a wider audience - the kind that reads an online encyclopedia.
- Milton, if you wanted to block article approval you needed to apply to become an approval manager. As that has not been the case there appears to be limits to what control you have over the approval process. The approval process may be started by any editor or approval manager, and therefore isn't halted by any particular editor becoming tired of the approval process and not wishing to be further questioned.
- If you have concerns about the content of an article waiting to be approved then the talk page appears to be the place to voice them, however concerns about the conduct of the approvals manager may have more appropriate venues. David Finn 07:30, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you, David. We can always count on you to give us a lesson in manners or procedures on almost any subject that arises in CZ ... and I am sure that everyone appreciates your lessons as much as I do. Best regards, Milton Beychok 07:35, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks Milt! In that case I have one more for you - we have rules for editing talkpages which, in part, say:
- Do not edit other people's comments. This includes interspersing replies into the text of a pre-existing comment. Doing so is particularly problematic since the replies make it unclear who is saying what, so simply refrain from doing so at all. Add your reply after the end of the comment you're replying to.
- (emphasis mine). Cheers! David Finn 07:46, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
Before I perform the mechanics, I need some guidance and clarification from the EC concerning the names that go on the approval template. The current article is approved by Howard C. Berkowitz, but the new one will be approved by Anthony.Sebastian. I would think that we need at least one workgroup expert's name on the template. The EC:R-2011-027 isn't clear on this as it says that the constabulary would carry out the mechanics as described in The Approval Process, but that requires three workgroup editors or one non-participating workgroup editor. Is the intent of the EC to replace the one non-participating editor with the Approval Manager? D. Matt Innis 16:00, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
- Matt, I considered myself a non-participating editor, though not in Workgroup Chemistry. I do have an academic degree in chemistry (B.S.), and have authored/edited numerous article in Category Chemistry. In view of that, and that the approval updated an already approved version, I thought the Approval Manager justified in certifying approval. I thought with so few active Editors, and so long a delay in getting through the approval process, and the reasonable response Milt has made to comments, that would be okay. If not, I prefer the guillotine to the gibbet. —Anthony.Sebastian 18:40, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
- Is this new version/draft of Boiling point approved yet? In case some reviewer/editor observes that an example boiling point diagram is needed since the last prose section mentions one, then there is one available at Citizendium to be inserted into this article. Henry A. Padleckas 23:47, 6 March 2012 (UTC)
- Henry, if you hurry and contact Anthony.Sebastian immediately, you may be able to get your diagram included before the re-approval is completed. But do so as quickly as you can ... and tell him that I am in agreement as documented right here. Milton Beychok 03:22, 7 March 2012 (UTC)
- Well, so the long delay has finally some positive effect ... :-) --Peter Schmitt 10:24, 7 March 2012 (UTC)
- I updated the version url to include Henry's diagram. Anthony.Sebastian 18:58, 8 March 2012 (UTC)
- Approved. Thanks for your patience and perserverence. D. Matt Innis 02:27, 9 March 2012 (UTC)