Talk:Breast cancer/Archive 1

Avoid a Wikipedia role

I would strongly object to considering this a Wikipedia import, and making sure there is no Wikipedia text in the article. There are several Citizens quite capable of writing original content for this article.

Right now, there are discussions about licensing and competitive positioning that argue about being very restrictive on Wikipedia importing, especially when WP is importing CZ articles and then gets higher Google ratings. Howard C. Berkowitz 11:33, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

It isn't marked as a WP import, but as "some content may have appeared on WP". If you have a look at this diff, you will see that lots of paragraphs are unchanged from the original version that was imported from WP. As it stands, we must include the WP flag. It would be nice if we could remove all the WP content however. --Chris Key 11:38, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

Without writing a script, do you know of a tool that could show the WP material underscored or something else that will be visible on a monochrome printer? Ideally, it would be nice to see WP content on a WYSWIG editor.

Another challenge -- I was thinking of illustrations, but I am reminded of Hayford's desire not to see gore. Microscopic anatomy is no problem, but, while a photograph or detailed drawing of peau d'orange would explain better than words, it both might be disturbing to some, and, further, is what others point out involves nudity. Howard C. Berkowitz 16:30, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

No, I'm afraid I know of no such tool, and a quick google didn't come up with anything either.

With regards to the images... I have no clue either. Personally I have no objection to any image that conforms to law, but then I'm not squeemish and I'm not a parent. --Chris Key 18:20, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

Approval

I'm afraid that as of July 17, this lacks a good deal to be Approval-ready. For example, the pathological classification has only redlinks. There is no detailed discussion of the issues of aromatase inhibitors vs. tamoxifen in pre- and post-menopausal patients.

History is not just ancient -- the impact of the low-dose CMF adjuvant regimen in the mid-seventies rates discussion, and, for that matter, less effective palliation such as Cooper 5-drug. The evolution of the radical mastectomy, and the movement away from it, is historically important. Howard C. Berkowitz 11:33, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

I'm adding sourced notes on the evolution of chemotherapy. Howard C. Berkowitz 18:52, 17 July 2010 (UTC)

Version

Jonas has nominated a version from three months ago? Is this a mistake? There have been numerous edits to the article since then -- are none of them worth having in the Approved version? I looked at the *original* article brought in from WP a couple of years ago. There have been *many* edits to the article since then, but, as other people are saying, it looks to me as if there may still be *massive* amounts of WP material here. I don't say I wouldn't, but I would feel awfully uneasy about Approving this article on the basis of a single Editor's say-so. Especially since Jonas, who, goodness knows has a truly impressive set of credentials in the field, only joined the Project two days ago and has not, shall we say, had much time to familiarize himself with our zeitgeist. Hayford Peirce 18:45, 17 July 2010 (UTC)

The version that Jonas nominated was the current version when he started the nomination process. All the edits since then have occured since nomination began. I am VERY concerned about just how much of this article is from WP, and personally I am hoping that approval is postponed (quite possibly for some time). However, I am not an editor in a related workgroup nor am I particularly knowledgable about the topic of the article. Howard appears apposed to the approval also, but he is also not an editor in a related workgroup.

The following are active editors in the Health Sciences workgroup: User:Robert Badgett, User:Gareth Leng, User:Supten Sarbadhikari, User:Anthony.Sebastian. Perhaps one (or more) of them should be contacted for their opinion.

Of course, it may be a good idea to contact Jonas also. According to the approval process, "the existence of unanswered author critiques" is reason enough to doubt editor support. --Chris Key 19:02, 17 July 2010 (UTC)

Authority on the squeamish

Hayford, I know of some informative images, which I would not inflict on any unexpecting reader, but would be useful to someone prepared for them and wanting that level of detail. I could set them up as external links, but, from reasonable comments you've made, I think it's a good idea to mark internal or external links with some disclaimer.

While I have distaste for the mealymouthed "viewer discretion is advised", I'm thinking of one photograph of inflammatory breast disease, which I found useful even though I can easily see how it would upset stomachs. Any suggestions on an appropriate disclaimer? Howard C. Berkowitz 18:56, 17 July 2010 (UTC)