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For the time being I moved the old intro to the bottom of the page. It needs to be rewritten and integrated into the main body of the page. | For the time being I moved the old intro to the bottom of the page. It needs to be rewritten and integrated into the main body of the page. | ||
--[[User:Peter Schmitt|Peter Schmitt]] 01:56, 12 January 2011 (UTC) | --[[User:Peter Schmitt|Peter Schmitt]] 01:56, 12 January 2011 (UTC) | ||
:The article certainly would benefit from expansion. | |||
:Peter, I'm sorry, but in this phrase "a new government was formed by Seyß-Inquart." 'Seyß' cannot be read by an English speaker, and consequently it is extremely distracting and off-putting to an English language reader. It needs to be rendered Arthur Seyss-Inquart (in German: Seyß-Inquart) or something similar; you handle this very well in the opening (Anschluss and Austria). | |||
:[[User:Aleta Curry|Aleta Curry]] 02:32, 12 January 2011 (UTC) | |||
Revision as of 20:32, 11 January 2011
Old intro
The previous introduction did not contain the basic information needed for this page. For the time being I moved the old intro to the bottom of the page. It needs to be rewritten and integrated into the main body of the page. --Peter Schmitt 01:56, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
- The article certainly would benefit from expansion.
- Peter, I'm sorry, but in this phrase "a new government was formed by Seyß-Inquart." 'Seyß' cannot be read by an English speaker, and consequently it is extremely distracting and off-putting to an English language reader. It needs to be rendered Arthur Seyss-Inquart (in German: Seyß-Inquart) or something similar; you handle this very well in the opening (Anschluss and Austria).
- Aleta Curry 02:32, 12 January 2011 (UTC)