User:Neil Brick/Sandbox/Cult and Ritual Abuse (book): Revision history

22 November 2023

• curprev 03:2703:27, 22 November 2023‎ Inactive User Bot talk contribs‎ 7,183 bytes +19‎ No edit summary

7 October 2019

• curprev 13:5413:54, 7 October 2019‎ imported>John Leach‎ 7,164 bytes +7,164‎ removed categories

28 April 2009

• curprev 09:5609:56, 28 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ m 7,211 bytes −1,477‎ Cult and Ritual Abuse (book) moved to User:Neil Brick/Sandbox/Cult and Ritual Abuse (book): Psychology editor suggested move to remove article from mainspace

8 April 2009

• curprev 21:3421:34, 8 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ m 7,211 bytes −43‎ Reverted edits by Neil Brick (Talk) to last version by Hayford Peirce
• curprev 21:1121:11, 8 April 2009‎ imported>Neil Brick‎ 7,254 bytes −427‎ trim lengthy review description, it is still the longest section for a review
• curprev 21:0721:07, 8 April 2009‎ imported>Neil Brick‎ 7,681 bytes +474‎ delete unnecessary biographical information, word choice
• curprev 21:0521:05, 8 April 2009‎ imported>Neil Brick‎ 7,788 bytes +581‎ much shortened restoration of one reference
• curprev 16:4416:44, 8 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 7,211 bytes +4‎ →‎Comments and critiques: hard to know what some of these sentences really are supposed to mean, but I did another fix-up of one
• curprev 16:4016:40, 8 April 2009‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 7,207 bytes −1,481‎ Focused on the book, not the issues and articles extensively discussed in the Satanic ritual abuse article
• curprev 16:2316:23, 8 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,676 bytes −12‎ rewriting and trimming of lede -- a lot of these stuff sounds like cant to me; what does "an organization intending to raise awareness about patients reporting experiences" mean, if anything?
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• curprev 16:1716:17, 8 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,649 bytes +25‎ →‎Comments and critiques: minor copyediting and rewriting for clarity
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21 March 2009

• curprev 14:3814:38, 21 March 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 7,250 bytes −653‎ →‎Comments and critiques: have removed some text to the Discussion page until it is clarified and rewritten.
• curprev 14:3814:38, 21 March 2009‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 7,903 bytes +77‎ Again a book review, not a "review" that could be a secondary analysis. "Evidence" appears nowhere in the Fletcher text
• curprev 14:3714:37, 21 March 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 7,826 bytes −1‎ →‎Comments and critiques: corrected a new link
• curprev 14:3514:35, 21 March 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 7,827 bytes +151‎ →‎Comments and critiques: identified "Victor" in the text; also corrected link formatting; please, Neil, don't just drop a last name here and there into the text....
• curprev 14:1114:11, 21 March 2009‎ imported>Shamira Gelbman‎ 7,676 bytes +1,345‎ →‎Comments and critiques: book reviews aren't articles
• curprev 12:3512:35, 21 March 2009‎ imported>Neil Brick‎ 7,673 bytes −16‎ remove block quote as per talk page
• curprev 12:2812:28, 21 March 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 7,689 bytes −178‎ Faller cite is not needed, it is an incomplete secondary (the actual book in this article is a more accurate source) and we have the primary source.
• curprev 12:2412:24, 21 March 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 7,867 bytes +6‎ →‎Comments and critiques: note that some only saw one case. Not sure how many only saw one case but a normal distribution with 70% seeing none would suggest it should be quite a few of them.
• curprev 12:1612:16, 21 March 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 7,841 bytes −20‎ →‎Comments and critiques: removed blockquotes since it's clearly not a quotation, just some paraphrasing. Also rewrote all of the blanket assertions of these psychologists about the reported abuse
• curprev 12:0412:04, 21 March 2009‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 7,861 bytes +112‎ →‎Comments and critiques
• curprev 12:0112:01, 21 March 2009‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 7,749 bytes +898‎ Copyedit -- separated two consecutive footnotes with supplementary text showing additional point in one
• curprev 11:5811:58, 21 March 2009‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 7,749 bytes +49‎ Broke up consecutive cites with text showing different information from sources
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20 March 2009

• curprev 21:4521:45, 20 March 2009‎ imported>Neil Brick‎ 7,684 bytes +833‎ fixing quote as per talk
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• curprev 13:5313:53, 20 March 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 6,851 bytes +520‎ this could be argued, I suppose, but I've put the entire title in the lede in Bold; if we have an article called Bill Tilden, for instance, in the lede we Bold "William Tatum ("Bill") Tilden....
• curprev 13:1713:17, 20 March 2009‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 6,851 bytes +34‎ No edit summary

19 March 2009

• curprev 22:3722:37, 19 March 2009‎ imported>Neil Brick‎ 6,817 bytes +484‎ add balancing quote for neutrality
• curprev 22:2222:22, 19 March 2009‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 6,383 bytes +50‎ Again moved Victor quote out of footnote and into main text. There is a very specific reason for doing this. See talk page.

17 March 2009

• curprev 22:2022:20, 17 March 2009‎ imported>D. Matt Innis‎ 6,333 bytes +2‎ no, have to move this - that was a direct quote
• curprev 22:1622:16, 17 March 2009‎ imported>Neil Brick‎ 6,331 bytes +6,331‎ add references
• curprev 22:0922:09, 17 March 2009‎ imported>D. Matt Innis‎ 5,593 bytes +850‎ put it in as a reference for now
• curprev 22:0522:05, 17 March 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 4,743 bytes −1‎ I'm sure that Caps were used in the title, if it was published in English; removed a space
• curprev 22:0422:04, 17 March 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 4,744 bytes 0‎ I'm sure that c
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• curprev 21:2321:23, 17 March 2009‎ imported>D. Matt Innis‎ 4,744 bytes +4,744‎ copy edits
• curprev 21:0321:03, 17 March 2009‎ imported>D. Matt Innis‎ 4,737 bytes +4,737‎ →‎Comments and critiques: this does not appear to be about the book see talk page

16 March 2009

• curprev 21:4621:46, 16 March 2009‎ imported>Neil Brick‎ 8,186 bytes +2,511‎ add references
• curprev 12:0112:01, 16 March 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ m 5,675 bytes +510‎ Cult and ritual abuse (book) moved to Cult and Ritual Abuse (book): REMEMBER_click_move_all_subpages
• curprev 10:4010:40, 16 March 2009‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 5,675 bytes +510‎ Perskin's affiliation
• curprev 10:3110:31, 16 March 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ m 5,165 bytes −3‎ Cult and ritual abuse moved to Cult and ritual abuse (book): REMEMBER_click_move_all_subpages
• curprev 09:2309:23, 16 March 2009‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 5,165 bytes −3‎ Added references, fixed typo, moved phrase to talk page requesting clarification
• curprev 09:2109:21, 16 March 2009‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 5,168 bytes +2,133‎ Added references, moved text needing clarification to talk page
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