Talk:Child sexual abuse: Difference between revisions
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==Some references== | ==Some references== | ||
Holmes WC, Slap GB: Sexual abuse of boys. JAMA 1998; 280:1855. | Holmes WC, Slap GB: Sexual abuse of boys. JAMA 1998; 280:1855. | ||
== We need a psychologist and sociologist on board == | |||
Mike, so far so good. Now you need to get a psychologist or a sociologist or both. If we decide to go Healing Arts, I can act as an editor as well, so with Nancy on board and another with the specific knowledge we are looking for, you might end up with a really good article with three editors to get it Approved. I would suggest that you go to both of those workgroups and look through the editor's bios and pick the ones that look the best. Contact them through their email or any way you can and ask them to come take a look at your article and comment and/or help further develop this article. Lets see what happens! I could do it for you, bt then it would be my article and since you did all the work.. :-) --[[User:D. Matt Innis|Matt Innis]] [[User talk:D. Matt Innis|(Talk)]] 22:23, 8 June 2007 (CDT) |
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Article status | Developed article: complete or nearly so |
Underlinked article? | No |
Basic cleanup done? | Yes |
Checklist last edited by | Mike Mayors (Talk) 21:51, 8 June 2007 (CDT) |
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Mike Mayors 10:58, 8 June 2007 (CDT) |
Note: "Effects of child sexual abuse" IS from Wikipedia
I feel it is important to note that the effects of sexual abuse is from Wikipedia. Although I tried to rewrite it entirely, there are some sentences or phrases left unchanged. The citations also remained intact. However, because a lot of the research cited is either controversial or experimental, maybe it can be replaced with more generally-accepted claims? Up to you guys, I just thought the section should be there regardless, so I imported it in. Mike Mayors (Talk) 11:23, 8 June 2007 (CDT)
Is it original
Is any of this from wikipedia? Do we need to check the button? Matt Innis (Talk) 08:09, 8 June 2007 (CDT)
toned down
I toned down the language in the first paragraph to be more inline with the family friendly policies. I am totally aware of all the implications here for accuracy and facing the realities of this atrocity, but I think we can present it without undo explicitness. Matt Innis (Talk) 07:47, 8 June 2007 (CDT)
This article is not from Wikipedia
Everything with the exception of "Effects of child sexual abuse" is not from wikipedia - it's from research done on Google, or information found on other sites. I went out of my way to completely write from scratch. I apologize for the lack of citations in other areas of the article, I'll try to add them soon. I also apologize for the explicit nature of the introduction paragraph...thx for fixing that. If you have any other problems, PLEASE let me know as I am still new here and don't all the rules/policies...though I think I've read them all. :) Mike Mayors 10:11, 8 June 2007 (CDT)
PS ... how do you sign your name with the "(Talk)" link? The four squiggilies (tildes) only links to my user page...
- I think you are doing fine, you just started off with a bang and I have to get you pointed in the right direction quicker than most :) . If the one section is from wikipedia, we might still have to check the box, read the section on new practices from wikipedia. I have to run, but will be back in a minute to give you the (Talk) hint ;-) Matt Innis (Talk) 10:28, 8 June 2007 (CDT)
A couple of points-I think you should include a section on incest because this is recognized as a recurrent form of sexual abuse of children. Also, the demographics need to be expanded outside of the USA. When it comes to reporting of child abuse, the class and social standing of the child have a lot to do with the numbers that are reported, in other words, there are many papers that show that teachers, nurses, doctors, are reluctant to view wealthy children as having been abused, and this feeds into distorting the statitistics for race and class, be aware of this and avoid naive reporting. Nancy Sculerati 15:32, 8 June 2007 (CDT)
Thanks Nancy, I'll keep that in mind. I'll try to gather statistics in other countries such as the UK or Canada. and I'll try to do a little research on Incest, or intrafamilial child sexual abuse. Mike Mayors (Talk) 17:23, 8 June 2007 (CDT)
Some references
Holmes WC, Slap GB: Sexual abuse of boys. JAMA 1998; 280:1855.
We need a psychologist and sociologist on board
Mike, so far so good. Now you need to get a psychologist or a sociologist or both. If we decide to go Healing Arts, I can act as an editor as well, so with Nancy on board and another with the specific knowledge we are looking for, you might end up with a really good article with three editors to get it Approved. I would suggest that you go to both of those workgroups and look through the editor's bios and pick the ones that look the best. Contact them through their email or any way you can and ask them to come take a look at your article and comment and/or help further develop this article. Lets see what happens! I could do it for you, bt then it would be my article and since you did all the work.. :-) --Matt Innis (Talk) 22:23, 8 June 2007 (CDT)