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[[User:Ross McEwan|Ross McEwan]] 18:02, 10 October 2011 (UTC)
[[User:Ross McEwan|Ross McEwan]] 18:02, 10 October 2011 (UTC)
Hi, good selection of references, great start.
[[User:Nancy Sabatier|Nancy Sabatier]] 12:22, 11 October 2011 (UTC)
Good work, the subject has been well covered. Remember to proof read (there are some repetitions and lack of clarity at times), to enter your references properly, and include your figures. [[User:Nancy Sabatier|Nancy Sabatier]] 11:02, 14 November 2011 (UTC)
:This has come together well; it reads clearly, is well referenced and reads as a scholarly evidence-based overview, and you've largely avoided the risk of glib and folksy "common sense". well done.[[User:Gareth Leng|Gareth Leng]] 17:39, 30 November 2011 (UTC)

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Helen Golz 15:17, 27 September 2011 (UTC)

Is there a better title for this? Poverty-induced obesity or relationship between poverty and obesity? (Chunbum Park 00:59, 28 September 2011 (UTC))

Possibly, we'll see how the article develops and consider nrenaming later.Gareth Leng 09:50, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

Hannah Harman 10:25, 4 October 2011 (UTC)

Ross McEwan 18:02, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

Hi, good selection of references, great start. Nancy Sabatier 12:22, 11 October 2011 (UTC)


Good work, the subject has been well covered. Remember to proof read (there are some repetitions and lack of clarity at times), to enter your references properly, and include your figures. Nancy Sabatier 11:02, 14 November 2011 (UTC)

This has come together well; it reads clearly, is well referenced and reads as a scholarly evidence-based overview, and you've largely avoided the risk of glib and folksy "common sense". well done.Gareth Leng 17:39, 30 November 2011 (UTC)
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