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==Definition and title==
== OK, where do we go from here? ==


'''''Please see the [[Talk:Vietnam_War/Archive_1 | earlier discussion]] on this topic in order to understand the context of these comments.'''''<br>
Oh Brave New World after the archiving, which has such wondrous things in it. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 21:01, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
:[[Talk:Vietnam_War/Archive_1]]
:keep reading friend.


If it hasn't already been pointed out in the [[Talk:Vietnam_War/Archive_1 | above extremely long page]], I'd like to point out that the opening sentence is unacceptable. Obviously, letting one of the parties to the war define it violates neutrality. [[User:Peter Jackson|Peter Jackson]] 11:37, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
==Green Box==
The green box at the top of the article adds some necessary context to this article, but there is a chronological gaffe.  The box says "[[Indochinese revolution|First Indochina War]] covers closely the anticolonial war against France, with interruptions for the events of the Second World War."  But the First Indochina War starts ''after'' World War II.  So how is that an "interruption?"  Please fix.


:Peter, I agree. Please look back a few months when this was a single massive article, by an author that was insistent &mdash; and explicit on presenting things from a U.S., not even South Vietnamese, perspective. The major effort toward neutrality, for both practical and personality reasons, first consisted of breaking up the main article into manageable subarticles, and working on neutrality there.
Regarding the remainder of the box, isn't it possible to discuss these ''related articles'' on the [[Vietnam War/Related Articles|Related Articles]] page?  I think that it would make more sense. [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 21:12, 17 August 2009 (UTC)


:This individual is no longer involved, and it is quite appropriate to look for a more neutral introduction, as well as still pulling out some of the later and less neutral text into subarticles. If my citing of Moore and Galloway in the Vietnamese museum doesn't exemplify there are multiple views, I don't know what can.  Sooner or later, it will be necessary to come to consensus on a better set of names, certainly for the major phases, and possibly the articles as a whole. I can take Vietnamese military history back to the Trung sisters in the first century CE, but I'd prefer someone else work on the even earlier history in my sandbox. Such a person should read Vietnamese.
{|border="1"
|style="background:lightgreen"|''This is a major second-level article for numerous articles about an extremely complex situation from 1962 to 1975.  [[Vietnam wars]] covers the context of conflict  between 1868 and 1999; there are separate articles on earlier history.  There was anti-French activity, but the main [[First Indochina War]] came after [[Indochina and the Second World War|the Second World War]]. This ends in 1975 with the fall of South Vietnam, but other wars continue in the [[Vietnam wars]] article.''
|}''


:So, we agree there is a problem. I am perfectly open to a signficantly revised opening, and a controlled renaming of articles -- the comma-rich convention was idiosyncratic. Nevertheless, I would ask for close cooperation in renaming, so as not to break links. I probably know them better than anyone at this point, and I still make mistakes and lose text.
==Headings==
I'm going to recommend also that the heading "Regional activity before South Vietnamese independence" find a shorter title so that the TOC isn't so wide. [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 21:12, 17 August 2009 (UTC)


:May I ask that you look at [[Battle of Ia Drang]] as something that I wrote, trying very hard to represent at least three standpoints: North Vietnamese, South Vietnamese, and American. I'm still working on obtaining some interview text, as, for example, not just the emotions but also the tactics of the PAVN at LZ X-ray.
== First Section ==


:I desperately want proposals, and there is so much to fix on the detailed level that I hope you have some time to make suggestions at the topmost level. If you get beyond the first sections, I think you'll see the subarticle structure and other text that provide the basis for more neutral writing. If you are interested, please help.
The last sentence in the first paragraph should wrap up the lede, to wit, it should explain why the topic ends in 1975 (i.e., south vietnamese surrender).  I'd also like to drop the reference to the first century conflict with China; it's just too far removed in time to be relevant.  It could probably be mentioned paranthetically: "... but to a long history of Chinese attempts to control the region (going back to the first century)."  "This article focuses on ..." I'm not a fan of self-referentiality.  The famous photograph of the helicopter on the roof during the evacuation in 1975, I've heard was ''not'' the U.S. embassy itself.  The paragraph dealing with weather is really out of place here.  It's interesting and important information, but it seems out of place here.
Last, the first section should also mention that the Vietnamese call this the "American War."
[[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 21:31, 17 August 2009 (UTC)


:Please focus not on the old definition in this page, but on the more recent work in the main page. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 12:17, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
:Yes, I too read the other day that the evacuation was from a neighboring building. Maybe in an obit of the guy who took the photo? I think that's the source.... [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 21:59, 17 August 2009 (UTC)


== change to Intro ==
::We're all correct about the helicopters. Indeed, the most commonly used photograph is from a nearby CIA building, but there was also desperation at the Embassy and elsewhere.


Existing lead:
::Let me think about China; some reference is important.


:Since there is a current state and government of [[Vietnam]], with full diplomatic representation including participation in international organizations, the final authorities on the definition of '''Vietnam War''' would appear to be the Vietnamese. They tend to refer to the Wars (plural) of Vietnam, often referring to a period starting sometime after 1959 and extending to 1975 as the "American War". Considering actions in [[Laos]] and [[Cambodia]] also confuse the terminology; not all the fighting there bore directly on Vietnam or [[French Indochina]].
::I moved the weather to the beginning of large-scale combat. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 22:04, 17 August 2009 (UTC)


:Without trying to name the wars, the key timeline events in modern history are:
:::Long time coming.... I've reworked this whole section into a lede and an "overview" section. [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 21:40, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
Proposed change to lead:
 
:The '''Vietnam War''' is a term used to describe a series of conflicts that took place from 1959 to 1975, between [[South Vietnam]], [[America]] and their allies, and the communist nations allied with [[North Vietnam]]. In the modern-day state of [[Vietnam]] the wars are often described in plural, or simply as the "American War".  
 
:The war in Vietnam was initially fought between South Vietnam (with non-mobile backing from America) and the communist North Vietnamese, later supported by its communist allies. America fully mobilised in 1964, but their advice and support, as well as covert operations, had been in place for several years. The military actions in [[Laos]] and [[Cambodia]] also complicate matters, as not all the fighting there bore directly on Vietnam or [[French Indochina]]. Americas involvement in the wars were part of an anti-communist policy called [[Containment]], which was an early element of the [[Cold War]].
 
:Without naming the wars, the key timeline events in modern history are:
 
My only real issue with the lead as it stands is that it is not encyclopedic language, and could cover more in less space. I'm mainly trying to get a better format, rather than get the facts exact.--[[User:Matt Lewis|Matt Lewis]] 18:47, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:There's no problem in improving the language, as it is a difficult topic, with a title that inherently is ambiguous. If you accept the premise that the Vietnamese are the real authority on the wars of their area, however, one cannot limit the definition such that the war starts in 1959.  At a very minimum, one has to go back at least to a declaration of independence in 1946, followed by the revolution against the French, and it's wise to go back to the French conquest in the 19th century. Since the Vietnamese themselves make a point, in their active museums and histories, to go through two millenia of fighting with the Chinese, the Wars (plural) go back, at least, to the Trung Sisters.
 
:Not reading Vietnamese, I can't go much before that; there literally are too many dragons to track.
 
:Now, I'm perfectly open to other wording that covers, at the very least, the modern wars, but I cannot see a lead that does not address the French colony, the resistance to it starting around 1930, and many things prior to 1959. [[Dien Bien Phu]] (1954) is as iconic to Vietnamese as Trafalgar and Waterloo are to Britons and French, Yorktown and Appomattox to Americans,  or Tsushima Strait to Japanese.
 
:I understand that you are focused on wording, but the proposed wording has substantial problems of fact unless the wars are seen as purely a sideshow of the Cold War. "Wars of Vietnam" would probably be a better title, but there is too much to change. Further, there really isn't a magic starting point in 1959, other than a decision by the North Vietnamese Politburo to change the means of achieving its existing political goals.
 
:By the way, I am really delighted that you are reading this; I absolutely welcome collaboration, since I've spent a great deal of time trying to clean up previous material that was not amenable to collaboration. When I look at this article, I am reminded of the temperance delegation that called on [[Winston Churchill]], to lecture him that they understood that all the brandy he drank during the [[Second World War]] would come up to (spot on wall). He pointed for confirmation, they nodded, and he muttered,
:<blockquote>So little have we done, so much have we to do.</blockquote>
[[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 18:59, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:Not being an expert (I know broadly as much about 'Vietnam' as your average educated Brit - perhaps a little bit more), the above is possibly the limit on what I can do without a lot of further research (I don't really have the time here, alas). Is it possible for you to work on what I have written? I tried to convery Vietnam as a modern state which has its own definition of the war.
 
:My main question would be; Are you happy with beginning "The '''Vietnam War''' is a term used to describe a series of conflicts that took place from 1959 to 1975,"? You could change “used” to "most commonly meant”.  Could you add the additional periods to the lead?
 
:The problem for me here could be the title (which you alude to) - to me "Vietnam war" conveys America (or the US, if that is better) fighting the Vietcong, and the Cold War in general. It is great to extend upon that definition, but as it is such a 'common name' I don't think we should lose site of the principal dates etc re North Vietnam.
 
:If the way you are taking the article requires a name change, perhaps you might be best to instigate one? I have a personal idea of "core articles" in my mind, and I stopped at this subject I suppose, as I see it as one. --[[User:Matt Lewis|Matt Lewis]] 19:31, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::I apologize for the length of the reply, but I know no good way to make it simpler -- although I'm open to suggestions.
 
::A name change would be good, but it's not something I'd like to take on without much discussion. By focusing on, for example, 1959-1975, it immediately brings up very different names from all sides &mdash; and there were more than two &mdash; which decidedly have a non-neutral flavor. There is a saying in the U.S., for example, that people from the North speak of the little disagreement between 1861 and 1865 as the "Civil War", the genteel sort in Virginia refer to the "Late Unpleasantness between the States", and the deep south may say "War of Yankee Aggression".  We run into that problem now, with the usage of [[Iraq War]] versus [[Operation IRAQI FREEDOM]].
 
::To answer your direct question, I am not at all comfortable with "The '''Vietnam War''' is a term used to describe a series of conflicts that took place from 1959 to 1975," 1959 is a problematic starting date as it refers to a secret policy decision and start of logistical buildup, rather than combat. 1954 might be a little better, in that it does define conflict between North and South Vietnam, even at an ideological level.  Alternatively, if one wants to include U.S. combat support, that could start in 1962, with direct combat in 1964.
 
::""Vietnam war" conveys America (or the US, if that is better) fighting the Vietcong, and the Cold War in general." Yes, and it conveys that to many people &mdash; but exclusively in the West. Even "Vietcong" is a quite arguable term. To take a parallel from your side of the pond, consider the distinction between Sinn Fein and the IRA (let's not get into ''which'' IRA). Quite a few analysts suggest that an equivalent relationship existed between the [[National Front for the Liberation of South Vietnam]] (NLF) and its fighting arm,the VC. Others argue that the NLF and VC were merely a sham for the North Vietnamese government. It is clear that the tanks that took Saigon in 1975 were not Viet Cong, but [[People's Army of Viet Nam]] (i.e., regular army of the North).  The VC/NLF, for that matter, suffered immense casualties in 1968, and many of its surviving leaders were later purged by their "own side" because they were not part of the Northern decisionmaking structure.  More complex than the situation on the Emerald Isle, however, is that no major external powers were involved between the British and Irish nationalists (of various flavors).
 
::A real challenge here is whether we want to preserve "popular opinion", which often is an oversimplification, or convey the reality. Perhaps there is a brief way to state the "popular definition" in the introduction, and identify it as a Cold War oversimplification.
 
::The immediate problem then becomes how to refer to what some call the Indochina War, certainly between 1946 and 1954, although many Vietnamese will take it back to the original resistance to French invasion, or to the nationalist fighting groups that formed during the [[Second World War]].
 
::I don't have a simple answer. May I ask you to look at the major subarticles covering time periods, and see if they make sense as titles? (e.g., [[Joint warfare in South Vietnam 1964-1968]], [[Fall of South Vietnam]]).  There are still problems with things that essentially were major parallel campaigns, such as ground operations in the South versus air operations outside the South. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 19:57, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:::I'm big on main articles, with subs - some of the above seems to be about content perhaps? I must say I have to see Citizendium as a Western encycolpedia, which covers things as objectively as possible - but is written in English for an English-speaking West. Does CZ have policy on this? I do like Wikipedia’s four paragraph intro format - I often used to focus on improving intros at WP (always per the 'common reader' and 'encyclopedic language' guidelines). We don't have the info boxes here to help us categorise of course.
 
:::I think it is fair to say that "Vietnam War" is the commonly-used term for 1959-1975. I would suggest starting with that as a basis, and using sub articles and clever prose to cover everything surrounding it. If not, we simply have to change the name IMO - or it could be kind of deadlock re progress. Using [[Vietnam War (1959-1975)]] does not prevent us providing background to the period in the article (nor does any title). I don't mind that format at all – as long as Vietnam War redirects to it.
 
:::Points we could cover in an Intro of Vietnam War
 
:::*Think about "see also" hatnotes. Cold War etc? (I always felt at Wikipedia that it needed the related articles at the top - CZ might do well to sort out a table-based system here).
 
:::*Convey that Vietnam War is a commonly-used term, that has ambiguities and can cover broad picture.
:::*Show commonly-used boundaries of term, and explain that it is more.
::::*Define west/east point of view.
:::*Explain parties involved.
:::*Briefly cover the most significant events and aspects.
:::*Have closing paragraph explaining legacy.
 
:::The above could stand whatever the title is.--[[User:Matt Lewis|Matt Lewis]] 20:49, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::::As to Matt's point about this being a Western encyclopedia, for an English-speaking West, I don't think that is the policy. Without researching the exact wording, it is probably correct to say it is an English-language encyclopedia -- but not culturally or ideologically specific beyond that, indeed with a goal of not being culturally or ideologically based. The Neutrality Policy, as I understand it (pictures Larry hysterically laughing at me), says that the different views need to be covered. In this particular case, I can bring myself (laugh away, Larry) to cover pretty much all the views in a way that their holders might consider sympathetic, or at least understanding -- as well as showing their conflicts. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 21:37, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::::Would the bulleted list of dates be a start for an index of subarticles? It still would need some introductory and explanatory text, such as the parties involved. Even "parties involved" gets complex, as I mentioned with the NLF/VC/PAVN/DRV factions, to say nothing of the French and VNQDD and Chinese and others. Only recently did I myself learn that a British force, in 1945, got French paratroopers out of prison and helped them overthrow a provisional government in the North. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 21:37, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:::::I certainly don't have an answer, or even a suggestion as to what should be done, but let me stick my nose in briefly to say that the lede para. is probably the worst one in all of CZ. I understand the difficulties involved, but this para. is just like a chat/discussion that should be on the Talk page.  Nuke it, maybe, and start from scratch. Break the article is 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, or however many it takes, maybe.  Do *something* Or just move the whole article to Cold Storage.... [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 21:00, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
===Nuclear weapons, no, not in Vietnam (although that's a subtopic)===
[trying to keep indentation at a level my eyes can track]
 
Hayford, that is a nuclear strike to which I would not object. You know a fair bit of the background of the rewrite of what was here, and my chief goals were to introduce neutrality and make the article maintainable for just the sort of discussion going on at this point. One of my major concerns, which well might justify a change to the right name(s), whatever they may be, was to get it away from what an original author had called US-centric to something that actually captures not just aspects of the Cold War, but Asian-Western perspectives. 
 
It can be fixed without going to Cold Storage. Fixing it will be a major job that ''needs'' collaboration.  If this can't be put into usable form, it's going to be just as hard to deal with other things as complex as the [[Second World War]] or the [[Holocaust]], neither  of which are well organized. Note that I am ''not'' a serious American Civil War, War of Yankee Aggression, Late Unpleasantness between the States, etc., student, and will be happy to let others fight ''that'' one. (e.g., "just what do you mean that the South lost?")
 
I kept the title for continuity. Personally, I might prefer "Wars of Vietnam". There is a bulleted list of major dates that might, indeed, be turned into a table of major events. Most of the first-level headings could easily become standalone articles. There really, really isn't a single thing, even from a U.S. perspective, that can be called "the" Vietnam War. Those of us who remember the start of large-scale combat in 1964 were completely unaware that U.S., and U.S. backed forces, had been in active fighting for at least two years. Substantial U.S. training and support went back to 1955, although this was fairly systematically kept from the public and Congress. Incidentally, I don't necessarily disagree with some of the decisions made back then, at least from the perspectives of the decisionmakers, what they believed, and what they knew (and didn't know). [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 21:37, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:I understand the difficulties. WP handles it by breaking it into First V. War, etc. As for 1964, seems to me that I was pretty aware of fighting having gone on for several years already. Maybe because I was of prime draft-age at the time.... [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 21:51, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
Background can always be given, whatever the title. How about:
 
[[Vietnam Wars (1959-1975)]]?
 
Other ideas:
 
[[Wars of Vietnam, Cambodia and Laos]]
 
[[Wars of Vietnam, Cambodia and Laos (1959-1975)]]
 
[[Second Indochina War]]
 
[[Second Indochina War (1959-1975)]]
 
[[Second Indochina War (Vietnam, Cambodia and Laos)]]
 
[[Cold Wars: Second Indochina War]]
 
[[Cold Wars: Vietnam, Cambodia and Laos]], etc
 
One concern is that without some confining dates, we may not be able to progress on the article - unless a suitable all-purpose title is found. Even then, covering too much could be hard to pull off. It's a bit like one of those 'classical' history books that are presented as a narrative (it currently even reads like that), but online encyclopedias don't really lend to that approach. --[[User:Matt Lewis|Matt Lewis]] 22:09, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::Matt, ''to the Vietnamese'', it does read like a narrative. Whether or not we replicate that, I think it's valuable to get across, to a Western audience, that the key participants ''do'' think of it as a continuum. They actively celebrate the first century rebellion of the Two Trung Sisters. I don't think one can begin to understand Sino-Vietnamese relations &mdash; the Cold Warriors certainly didn't &mdash; unless one realizes how long the two sides have been fighting (and occasionally loving). I'm not talking about esoterica such as how Mao thought the [[General Offensive-General Uprising]] model was completely insane.
 
::I would encourage using the bulleted list as a starting point, and perhaps turning it into a table with articles in it. Unfortunately, I don't know enough about table formatting to know if it would be possible to have merged cells that spanned date rows or columns, to deal with multiple names/emphases that covered some of the same years.
 
::You may remember, Hayford, that a previous author involved in the first version was adamant about the title, and the US-centricity. At the time, the battle wasn't worth fighting. Perhaps even a graphic showing overlapping years and dates might help; I had to do something like that in the specialized area of [[communications intelligence]] in Vietnam; here's an example from [[National Security Agency and Southeast Asia, 1954-1961]]:
[[Image:SIGINT-SEA-1959-1963.png| thumb | Significant events, 1959-1963. Hanyok is the source above the years and Gilbert below them.]]
 
:::"Ah, yes, I remember it (and him) well...." [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 22:45, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::This probably isn't the place to argue specific dates. To me, 1959-1975 doesn't make as much sense as either 1954-1975 (the whole active mess from partition), 1964-1972 (U.S. combat involvement), 1972-1975 (South Vietnam on its own), etc.
 
::Again, I'm not wedded to any specific title as long as it's based on some reasonable set of events. "Scholars" don't always agree, and I see no reason to be drawn into unsolved academic debates. What I do suggest is looking at the list of bulleted dates and see if any consensus of periods drops out of them; yes, there is some stuff prior to 1945 that is not shown.[[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 22:38, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:::I myself would probably go for [[Vietnam Wars, 1954-1975]], since I think the article has to begin (at some point) when the French handed things over to Dopey Dwight (at least in that case) and Frozen (ideas) Foster.... [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 22:45, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::::While that still doesn't cover other periods, it makes a great deal of sense. After all, until 1954, there wasn't officially (from a Western standpoint) a Vietnam. Even splitting into Vietnam Wars(plural) and Indochinese War(s) has good logic. 1972-1975 is also substantially different. Remember, I was in semi-stealth mode when A Certain Person was adamant about the title. 
 
::::Speaking of Dopey Dwight, I was amazed to discover today that JFK actually was a better golfer. OTOH, my opinion of DDE has gone up over the years, still very aware of his flaws. His role in getting the wilder nuclear advocates under control in 1959 or so is little known; see [[SIOP]] and [[George Kistiakowsky]]. For that matter, he sat on Arthur Radford, who wanted the U.S. to use nuclear weapons at [[Dien Bien Phu]], in the incredibly named Operation VULTURE. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 22:57, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:::::OK - [[Vietnam Wars, 1954-1975]]
 
:::::Does anyone reading have thoughts on this? My only worry is that we are bringing background into the actual dates, and the war actually started in 1959. Is that setting a precedent that could run us into probelms elsewhere? Few wars come from nowhere! We can surely start with a sction called ==Background to the 1959 invasion (or whatever)== that covers all you want in a narative form. At some point this will have to be actually written. The existing background sections (which are hard to follow) can be used of course - they are perhaps even best amalgamated into one backround. Most histories I read give pre-focus backgrounds. I can put the timelines into a table, which could come after the intro, as they do now.-[[User:Matt Lewis|Matt Lewis]] 23:12, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:::::::Speaking as someone with a fairly detailed knowledge of the subject, I'm going to have to raise a content point here. The "background" may seem confusing, but the background of many wars, especially ones with significant covert components, ''are'' confusing. Armies have whole departments, called ''maskirovka'' or deception, who have the job of making things confusing.
 
:::::::Rather than simply saying the material is generically hard to follow and needs to be redone, could you give some idea what specifically seems hard to follow? Perhaps some section needs to be clarified, but quite a bit of thought went into this structure, including "background to the background" that wasn't included -- maybe it needs to be.
 
:::::::Of the many years I'd say the "war" started, I definitely would not pick 1959.  There was no "1959 invasion". That would be like saying that for the U.S., the [[Second World War]] started in 1940, because mobilization started. 1959 was the year in which the North Vietnamese Politburo made a midyear decision to start creating the logistics for the Ho Chi Minh trail, but the actual intensity of fighting did not especially increase in 1959. Yes, U.S. advisers went into Laos in 1959, but, again, the combat really didn't start being serious until 1961 or 1962, depending on geographic boundaries. In 1959, they were surveying the infiltration routes and starting to build roads and other infrastructure; the last thing the PAVN wanted to do was fight anyone during that time.
 
:::::::The 1954 partition did not mean there was immediate peace. Guerilla incidents, probably mostly from Southern enemies of the government acting independently of the North, were becoming significant from 1956 or so.
 
:::::::Could you explain why you think 1959 is a starting date? To me, it is a date that involves policy and planning, but those are not usually considered the starting points of wars.  I rather deliberately picked "phase" dates when there was a change in the nature of fighting.
 
:::::::Obviously, someone is going to have to do the editing/rewriting/whatever, so the periods have to make sense for reasonable articles to be produced. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 23:24, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::::::::The commonly-known 'starting dates' of wars often begin with the date of either clear declarations or decisive aggressions (like I have said, they never rarely start at any single point). Look at WW1 and WW2. History is taught in dates -  and I must admit that you are starting to frustrate me just a little, as I am actually very flexible and pluralistic. I feel like I'm pushed to an opposing side regarding matters.
 
::::::::According to Wikipedia (pan it if you will, but I make no apologies about using it - it's a hell of a lot better than here, which has the same pretentions!): ''"Finally, in January 1959, the North's Central Committee issued a secret resolution authorizing an "armed struggle". This authorized the southern communist to begin large-scale operations against the South Vietnamese military. However, North Vietnam supplied troops and supplies in earnest, and the infiltration of men and weapons from the north began along the Ho Chi Minh Trail. In May, South Vietnam enacted Law 10/59, which made political violence punishable by death and property confiscation.[47]".''
 
::::::::Wikipedia use the date 1959-1975, as do Encarta (it is in fact common in books, and is all over the web) - although Britannica uses 1954-1975, as does the BBC school site I notice - so that too is clearly a popular (more modern perhaps?) 'start date'. If you want to go from 1954, then by all means use that date. But remember that it is no good making demands and expecting others to do the work, or pushing them into corners either: you must go by that date. I'm not really here for this kind of debate - and I already explained that I'm not an expert here, so I shouldn't really have to do that twice. I came in here to help improve an utterly unencyclopedic intro, that few people in my eyes will respect reading, however nice it is to the Vietnamese!
 
::::::::If you want a narrative by all means have a narrative (I've suggested a way to do this), but I think it is silly to defend the current mutli-view section-based approach at the same time. The whole article is hard to follow - in my opinion it is consistently making an "Isn't this subject hard ot follow readers?!" point in the very language it uses. I haven't read it word for word (too hard), but I've run through it. It's got an identity crisis.--[[User:Matt Lewis|Matt Lewis]] 00:28, 9 December 2008 (UTC)
===Indentation again===
Gentlemen, I get the feeling that you got off to a rocky start based on a difficult decision.  Why not start with something a little less obscure until you realize that you are both saying the same thing and then things might well be more enjoyable for everyone and we can work this article into something we can all be impressed with.  [[User:D. Matt Innis|D. Matt Innis]] 03:14, 9 December 2008 (UTC)
{{freshstart}}
 
== more title discussion, but a completely different point ==
 
It seems hard to believe that no one apparently has brought this up before:
 
"Vietnam" is a noun.  "Vietnamese" is an adjective.
 
Do we have articles about the "Korea War"? The "Spain-America War"? The "Mexico War"?
 
I think not.
 
Then why should we have an article (however named) about the "Vietnam War"? Simply because The Previous Contributor did it this way?  If so, this is simply one more example of his wrong-headedness.
 
As the resident grammarian and curmudgeon, I am gonna insist that *whatever* the final form of the title, it uses the flippin' adjective in it and *not* the noun.  Ie, the '''Vietnamese Wars of 1954-1975'' or whatever.
 
Am I wrong about this? If so, specific details, please.... [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 19:09, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:I don't have a good answer for this because I've never given it any thought before.  But, Hayford, you're right.  The Vietnam War is (perhaps) grammatically incorrect and should be, like the others, the "Vietnamese War."  However, I can see two reasons why this might not be acceptable.  First, wars that the US wins should be grammatically correct; wars that the US loses, well, we don't like to talk about that so in those cases any grammar (however poor) will suffice. :)  Second (and more seriously), colloquially this is what the war has come to be called.  A quick survey of JSTOR shows little over 400 scholarly articles calling the event the "Vietnamese War" and over 16,000 scholars using the term "Vietnam War."  It's like the "United States" itself.  "The United States was involved in the Vietnam War" has become a grammatically correct sentence through usage (in spite of using a singular verb with a plural noun and using a noun to describe another noun).  English is a gloriously consistent language, no?  [[User:Russell Jones|Jones]] 19:47, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::And, of course, we now have the "Iraq War", not the "Iraqi War". Sigh. I give up.... [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 20:10, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:::Actually, it had been brought up in the discussions several months ago, and it was one of the many things the original author was insistent about. Yes, "Vietnam War" is commonly used, but at the time, actually doing research for the Army, we tended to say "War in Vietnam" or "The war".
 
:::If I had my choice here, I'd call this top-level article "Wars of Vietnam". That has, I believe, been used as a title for some scholarly works. I'd then, as I have it now, would focus on subarticles that characterize either periods of time, or aspects of the situation, such as the South Vietnamese coup du jour from 1963 to 1967, in other subordinate articles. Let there be a table or some structure for the links.
 
:::There certainly can be a redirect from Vietnam War, but, if one literally follows Larry's idea of neutrality policy, why isn't there an "American War", which is what you will find in museums in Hanoi? It's ironic that at the same time, the Vietnamese tend to be extremely welcoming of Americans who fought there.
 
:::I hope that anyone that thinks seriously about even the modern historical picture recognizes this didn't all magically start at the Gulf of Tonkin.  I can easily trace some of the same key players, such as Ho and Giap, to 1930 or so, and it really is one continuous process to them. There was a quantum change in anticolonialism with the symbolic declaration of independence in 1946. One really can't separate the Viet Minh from the VC/NVA. 
 
:::At the same time, there were definite qualitative and quantitative changes in the warfare at various stages of U.S. and non-U.S. involvement.
 
:::Again, if I were Emperor of the Universe, I'd remind people that '''you are talking about two millenia of conflict. It's not one war.'''.  Ah. That felt better.
 
:::Hayford, can you live with '''Wars of Vietnam''', with the various subarticles, and a redirect from "Vietnam War" [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 22:06, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::::Yes, I was going to suggest that myself. Although I think it might be more realistic to have '''Wars of Vietnam, 20th Century'''; '''Wars of Vietnam, Zero to 1899''', etc. With a gazillion redirects.... [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 22:39, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:::::Alternatives would be: '''American-Vietnamese War'''; '''French-Vietnamese Wars'''; '''Chinese-Vietnamese Wars''', etc.[[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 22:39, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::::::Dates work reasonably well, although there typically was a key event in a given year that gives a "before" and "after", ending one period and starting another: 1946, 1954, 1964, and 1972 are such.  There need to be a number of supporting articles; the [[Government of South Vietnam]] article covers a period of constant coups. Isn't it more Italian than French to have governments that last no more than 2 weeks? [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 23:37, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:::*Howard, I like the idea of a macro-level article on the "Wars of Vietnam" that would put the many Vietnam/Vietnamese wars into a broad context and then linking '''''to''''' (not redirecting from) an article called the "Vietnam War."  This is mostly what you've already accomplished here, starting at the heading [[Vietnam War#French Indochina Background|French Indochina Background]].  Much of the article also remains at the high policy level (national politicians deciding national direction and military objectives); there is no ground-level description of the wars here.  For instance, Dien Bien Phu is mentioned just once in passing.  But this is okay, because such a ground-level description for this article would start mucking it.  I'm not sure if there are sub-article narratives of the wars (I haven't looked at all the linked articles, yet), but I assume that a reader would get the nuts-and-bolts of the wars somewhere else.  Also missing from this article is the 1979 Sino-Vietnamese War; and didn't Vietnam have something to do with the downfall of Pol Pot regime in Cambodia?  A "Wars of Vietnam in the Twentieth Century" article should include those as well.  I think that the work you're doing on this article is top-rate, and I appreciate the efforts you've been making.  Thanks. [[User:Russell D. Jones|Jones]] 23:47, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::::Do see [[Dien Bien Phu]], which is two levels down the hierarchy &mdash; yet with various lateral links to participants who were participants then (e.g., [[Van Tien Dung]] as well as the better-known [[Vo Nguyen Giap]]), and some are still active or at least available for interviews. There are compare-and-contrast, such as how [[Dien Bien Phu]] was like, and unlike, the [[Battle of Khe Sanh]] (I've never heard anyone say "Battle of" Dien Bien Phu, but often "Battle of" Khe Sanh).  Khe Sanh, in turn, goes to some of speculative strategic thinking in [[General Offensive-General Uprising]] and (piped from a title I dislike) [[North Vietnamese cadre | ''dau trinh'']].
 
::::Even with something like Dien Bien Phu in its own article, there's always the question of the level of detail. For example, one cannot understand how certain things happened without understanding how and where the Viet Minh artillery was emplaced, but I don't go over the order of the strongpoints falling. Actually, I don't remember if Gabrielle fell before Beatrice, and it has never been firmly established if each strongpoint was named for a mistress of the commander, BG de Castries.
 
::::I don't disagree that things didn't stop in 1975, but that was where the earlier articles stopped and I took it as an arbitrary point. Actually, I'm moving beyond 1975 more in the biographical and political articles, dealing in part with modern Vietnam, such as market reform and infrastructure development -- involving people who might have been platoon leaders at Dien Bien Phu.
 
::::We don't even have a basic article on [[Cambodia]], so it's a challenge to deal with the interactions of the Vietnamese and the Chinese with the Khmer Rouge. In some CIA-related articles I haven't touched in a while, there is some material about the drug trade in Southeast Asia.
 
::::There's much interesting material about modern Vietnam that's falling out as well. Changing from my military to my epidemiological hat, there is immense respect, in infectious disease circles, for how proactive and cooperative the Vietnamese government has been regarding the various avian influenzas.
 
::::It is hard to write at this length almost all on the screen; when I've done books, there was a point that I needed lots of piles of paper. I'm sure there's unneeded duplication in some of the articles.  Some things that I know are duplicated perhaps should be articles of their own, linked from several places.  More eyes on this definitely help. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 00:11, 15 December 2008 (UTC)
== Rename ==
 
So, yes, Howard, if you're looking for support for renaming this article, I think that a title such as the "Wars of Vietnam in the 20th Century" is more descriptive of the content that is currently here.  [[User:Russell D. Jones|Jones]] 23:50, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:We can probably get away with an article on the pre-20th century French conquest, although that bleeds into the 20th century. I do have a stub on the [[Trung Sisters]]. While I tried to go back to their original wars, the legendary descriptions were such that I got lost who was the offspring of a dragon, who was a shape-shifting dragon-human, and who was a fundamentalist dragon. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 00:11, 15 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::We are close, I think. I assume there would be a "Wars of Vietnam" to cover the pre-20th century cases.
 
::It's a nit, I realize, but the French invasion and colonization started in 1858, and there was warfare to resist it. Since the colonization extended from 1858 to 1954, there's no clean 20th century break. "Wars of Vietnam in the mid-19th century to Present" is silly, especially my handwaving about "present" since they still have assorted border conflicts [https://www.cia.gov/library/publications/the-world-factbook/geos/vm.html#Issues].
 
::I'm drawing a blank on a better name, but it should occur to someone. "Modern" wars sounds a bit patronizing.
 
::While I just have a stub on [[Trung Sisters]], it really is important to the Vietnamese that they've been fighting the Chinese, on and off, for two millenia. I'm not even going to touch the legends before the 1st Century CE. Since, however, one of the major U.S. reasons for intervention was fear that the Chinese would take over, to me, it's highly relevant that the Western policymakers didn't know enough Vietnamese history to suggest that it would be highly implausible they would not resist Chinese expansion.
 
::It's actually sadly amusing -- NPR, a while back, interviewed a U.S. worker who lost his job to a Mexican plant, a Mexican worker who lost his job to China, and a Chinese official who was furious that jobs were being moved out of China and into Vietnam.  It is rumored that some Vietnamese economic intelligence people are infiltrating the penguins to see if anything might get offshored to Antarctica.
 
::Seriously, let's get this right. A simple redirect won't be adequate for the changes, because we'll need to keep "Vietnam War" to point to a sort-of-disambiguation-page.  Lots of R-templates will also complain if they point to a redirect.
 
:::Well, in the section above I suggested '''French-Vietnamese Wars''' -- what's wrong with that? It's precise, and yet it covers the entire 94-year period in question.... [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 17:07, 15 December 2008 (UTC)
 
==Alternate lead==
 
Current:<blockquote>Over two millenia of conflict, there was no one "Vietnam War", but rather many Wars of Vietnam. Since there is a current state and government of Vietnam, with full diplomatic representation including participation in international organizations, the final authorities on the definition of Vietnam War would appear to be the Vietnamese. They tend to refer to the Wars (plural) of Vietnam, often referring to a period starting sometime after 1959 and extending to 1975 as the "American War". Considering actions in Laos and Cambodia also confuse the terminology; not all the fighting there bore directly on Vietnam or French Indochina. </blockquote>
 
First pass:
 
Southeast Asia, and especially the area of [[Indochina]], of which [[Vietnam]] was a major component, has known wars for two millenia, so it is inadequate to speak of a single '''Vietnam War'''. Nevertheless, for those in the West, the '''Wars''' of '''Vietnam''' clearly end with the forcible Vietnamese unification in 1975. From a U.S. standpoint, it may appear to have started in 1964 with overt combat, although there was earlier covert involvement. Another starting date is 1954, when North and South Vietnam were created after a revolutionary war against France. Some take it back to a declaration of independence in 1946, and others to the original French colonization in 1858. This article sets some background prior to the [[Second World War]], and has numerous subsections that break out various time periods and their policy, political, and military aspects.
 
This is, in no way, perfect, but it's less essay-ish than the prior version, which was burdened with an argument against US-centric writing.  Please hack at this and see if it can be improved; I'm too close to it right now. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 16:45, 15 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:How about "Wars of Vietnam, 1858-1980"
 
:"Since the French Colonization beginning in 1858, the region of Southeast Asia has seen many conflicts.  Collectively, these conflicts can be called the '''Wars of Vietnam'''.  These conflicts would include [earlier wars of which I am not familiar], the Japanese occupation during World War II, the French-Indochina War (1946-1954), the South Vietnamese Civil War (1957-1964), the Vietnam War (1965-1975), and the Sino-Vietnamese War (1979)."  [Or whatever periodization you decide upon.]
 
:I think every first paragraph of every article needs to hit the ground running.  What is this article about?  It is about the many conflicts in Vietnam since the beginning of French Colonization.  The first paragraph should say as much.  I think the discussion about "For those in the West" and "From the US standpoint" should be relegated to the talk page (from which it is my suspicion they originated). The first paragraph should resolve ambiguity, not contribute to it. [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 19:43, 15 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::I agree with Russell 100% -- I was just trying to get the ball rolling. [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 19:48, 15 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:::Thanks, everyone. We are getting there. First, let me copy the latest version to match the names. I'm then going to take a second paragraph breaking down the "Vietnam War"; it's an open question if we say anything about it being "in the West". I can source that they call it the "American War" in Hanoi (well, I returned the book to the library so I can't do the page).
 
:::I am open to alternate wordings on the period. In fact, many of the names here are not the current titles of the articles in question; you can move your cursor over them or click to get the articles.
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:::Beginning with French colonization in 1858 of the area generally called [[Indochina]], that region of Southeast Asia has seen many bloody conflicts.  Collectively they can be called the '''Wars of Vietnam'''.  These wars stretched from the French colonial period, involving nationalist resistance, until [[Indochina and the Second World War|events of the Second World War]], the [[Indochinese revolution]] (1946-1954), the [[The Two Vietnams after Geneva|First Indochinese War]] (1954-1962), the involvement of outside forces in the '''[[to-be-named-Vietnam War]]''' (1962-1975), and the [[Sino-Vietnamese War]] (1979)." 
 
:::During the [[The Two Vietnams after Geneva‎|First Indochinese War]], North Vietnam made the policy decision, in 1959, to invade the South and surreptitiously began its preparations. U.S. advisers had been present in the South since 1955, but they began to accompany combat operations in 1962. '''[[to-be-named-Vietnam-War]]''' had several phases, beginning with the [[U.S. support to South Vietnam before Gulf of Tonkin|advisory buildup]] (1962-1964), the [[Gulf of Tonkin incident]] in 1964, the U.S. ground combat involvement (1964-1972), [[South Vietnam's ground war, 1972-1975|South Vietnam fighting its own ground war]] (1972-1975) until the [[fall of South Vietnam]] in 1975.  Vietnam first invaded Cambodia in 1975 with varying levels of fighting until 1989, and, related to this fighting, China briefly invaded Vietnam in 1979, with tension remaining at the border.
 
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:::Several notes here. [[Indochina and the Second World War]], or "events of the Second World War", are awkward names, but something has to  go back to 1936, which will surprise many Western readers, but if you consider the Manchurian Incident in 1931...well, consider how many Americans believe WWII started in 1941, not thinking of the German demonstrations of their great new driving machines in Poland and France. (There was, indeed, a Porsche tank, but it was an experiment only)
 
:::"First Indochinese War" actually does appear in some literature, although there's no universal designation.  A very few writers call the conventional "Vietnam War" the "Second Indochinese War", but I've never like that.
 
:::I want to think about whether "Sino-Vietnamese War" covers the assorted China-Vietnam-Cambodia activities, and whether that is ambiguous given the many pre-French conflicts between China (under various forms and names) and Vietnam (under various forms and names).
 
:::Who knows -- maybe we will work out some conventions here that can help organize the [[Second World War]]. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 20:46, 15 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::::Looks good, Howard.  Yeah, I had thought about throwing out the ideas of the First and Second French-IndoChina Wars, but I never liked the term "Second French Indo-China War" because by the time that (so-called) war happened "French Indo-China" no longer existed.  I think what the Vietnamese call the "American War" should be called the "Vietnam War" here on CZ.  I think it's just what people would expect it to be called.  LOL on the bit about the Second World War; but you're doing all the leg-work here!  [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 22:30, 15 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:::::I'm very tempted to put in a redirect from "American War", and see what the reaction is from the right side of the pond..."What? Viet Cong ambushed us at Lexington and Concord? We were beaten by PAVN at New Orleans?"  If I recall, and I have no idea of their designation today, the Green Jackets were the Royal American Regiment.
 
:::::Well, WWII here is going to be a team effort if it's going to get done in any reasonable time here. (rolls eyes...if Donald Rumsfeld had read "Remedial How-to-Plan-an-Occupation", Chapter OPERATION RANKIN CASE C"). Given I don't know the level of your students, I was wondering what answer you would get on the first day, if you asked "when did the Second World War start?"  I would give an A+ to anyone who answered "World War? Antarctica wasn't at all part, and it's hard to justify South America and subsaharan Africa."
 
:::::Seriously, assuming there's a "Vietnam War" under "Wars of Vietnam, etc.", there remains the question of the names for some of the third-level subarticles. Do these work? (alternatives in parens)
:::::*[[U.S. support to South Vietnam before Gulf of Tonkin]] (U.S. advisory buildup)(side note...I haven't really said much about Laos outside a CIA article)
:::::*[[Gulf of Tonkin incident]] in 1964
:::::*[[Joint warfare in South Vietnam 1964-1968]] (the U.S. ground combat involvement (1964-1978))
:::::*[[Vietnamization]] (really 1969-1972)
:::::*[[South Vietnam's ground war, 1972-1975]] South Vietnam fighting its own ground war (1972-1975)
:::::*[[Fall of South Vietnam]]
 
:::::Of course, there are all sorts of sub-branches. The battles are reasonable enough when hierarchical, but then there are assorted things such as [[Vietnam War ground technology]], which goes to the more general [[air assault]].  There are at least three logical articles on air operations against the North, and [[ARC LIGHT]] needs its own -- but the general support in SVN can probably live within its own time periods.
 
:::::There's always the question when to say "this is good enough for now", and try to start on WWII. Perhaps not strictly WWII, the Holocaust and the Nazi articles also have lots of problems. [[Gulf War]], I think, is in reasonable shape, but I have no desire to get near [[Iran-Iraq War]].
 
:::::You've noticed we don't have a separate article, at all, for Afghanistan after 9/11?  [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 22:56, 15 December 2008 (UTC)
===Anybody interested in Vietnam-China-Cambodia?===
I realize I'm not even sure what to call it, other than (chastise me for it) discovering the Other Place uses Third Indochinese War.  Is there anyone that would like to start this?  I'm debating what to take on next.
 
This is, I suppose, beginning to sound like a workgroup discussion. Given I've tried to pay a good deal of attention to the politics, policies, and cultural aspect, this clearly isn't just "military history". In all fairness, one of the only decent collaborations at The Other Place is the Military History Project. At some point, if we can hit critical mass, perhaps a "subgroup" might be appropriate there. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 23:54, 15 December 2008 (UTC)
===What did you do in the war, papa?===
OK, Hayford. One of the things I worked on, during the war, were tactical personnel detectors, one of which was fairly effective, but not very selective. A lot of water buffaloes got bombed as a result. 
 
So, the U.S. Army Night Vision Laboratory, at Fort Belvoir, started developing things that could be specific. They came up with a species of bedbug that sensed humans, and would start vibrating when a person got within about 5 feet. So, they came up with these little airdroppable capsules that had a radio transmitter that was activated whenever the bedbug started buzzing, and sent its position.  It really did work.
 
When the lab presented it to the relevant general, it was rejected. He explained that no matter how well it worked, he would not subject any of his men being asked, decades later, "what did you do in the war, papa?"  and have to answer "I was a bedbug wrangler."
 
Fiction just doesn't measure up to truth at times. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 00:51, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
 
== Most Recent Introduction ==
 
Okay, I was bold and went ahead and inserted the new introduction.  It seemed silly to keep editing the introduction on the talk page.  Here's the most recent previous introduction.  [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 00:54, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
 
Over two millenia of conflict, there was no one "Vietnam War", but rather many '''Wars of Vietnam'''. Since there is a current state and government of [[Vietnam]], with full diplomatic representation including participation in international organizations, the final authorities on the definition of '''Vietnam War''' would appear to be the Vietnamese. They tend to refer to the '''Wars (plural) of Vietnam''', often referring to a period starting sometime after 1959 and extending to 1975 as the "American War". Considering actions in [[Laos]] and [[Cambodia]] also confuse the terminology; not all the fighting there bore directly on Vietnam or [[French Indochina]].
 
This top-level article is principally at the policy level. For articles detailing  of the actual military actions, follow the links from the appropriate period below:
*1858-1862: French invasion and establishment of colonial government
*1941: [[Indochina and the Second World War|Japanese invasion of French Indochina]]
*1945: End of [[World War II]] and return of Indochina to French authority; [[Indochinese revolution|formal resistance]] starts circa 1946.
*1954: End of French control and beginning of [[The Two Vietnams after Geneva‎|partition]] under the Geneva agreement; CIA covert operation started
*1955: [[U.S. support to South Vietnam before Gulf of Tonkin|First overt U.S. advisers]] sent to the South
*1959: [[Ho Chi Minh trail|North Vietnamese policy decision]], in May 1959 to create the 559th (honoring the date) Transportation Group and begin covert infiltration of the South
*1961: U.S. advisory support begins to extend to tactical movement and fire support
*1964: [[Gulf of Tonkin incident]] and start of U.S. [[Joint warfare in South Vietnam 1964-1968|ground combat involvement]]; U.S. advisors and support, as well as covert operations, had been in place for several years
*1969: [[Vietnamization]] policy starts
*1972: [[South Vietnam's ground war, 1972-1975|South Vietnamese take over ground combat responsibility]] Withdrawal of last U.S. combat forces as a result of negotiation
*1975: [[Fall of South Vietnam|Overthrow of the Southern government]] by regular Northern troops, followed by reunification under a Communist government.
 
While some see a period in which fighting in Southeast Asia merely was a proxy for what many Westerners believe was an existential battle between Western and [[Communist]] ideology, this is a view external to that of Vietnam. The wars between 1946 and 1975, however, were clearly existential ''for the Vietnamese''. Moyar, quoting Fredrik Logevall,  writes of a "orthodox-revisionist split" about it being "axiomatic" that the U.S. was wrong to go to war in Vietnam, and suggests that the [[revisionist]] position is that the U.S. had a rational Cold War policy in committing to fight in Vietnam. <ref name=Moyar>{{citation
| title = Triumph Forsaken
| first = Mark | last = Moyar
| publisher = Cambridge University Press | year = 2006
}}, p. xii</ref> This ignores, however, the reality that whether their motivations were world-communist or purely nationalist, the ''Vietnamese'' were fighting. If this article were solely about the U.S. involvement in Vietnam, the argument might be compelling. It is, however, a trap to assume that the wars of Vietnam, beginning before Europeans set foot on the North American continent, are somehow dependent on the U.S.  The U.S. involvement, of course, does involve the U.S., and there are subarticles here that deal specifically with that involvement.
 
Vietnamese drives for independence begin, at least, in the 1st century C.E., with the [[Trung Sisters]]' revolt against the Chinese; the citation here mentions the 1968th anniversary of their actions.<ref name=VNN2008-03-14>{{citation
| title =Ha Noi celebrates Trung sisters 1,968th anniversary
| date = 14 March 2008
| url = http://www.vietnamnews.com.vn/showarticle.php?num=02CUL140308
| journal = Viet Nam News}}</ref> It cannot be strongly enough emphasized that the Vietnamese, as a people, live in a context of millenia of war. Individuals may have been fighting for decades, with no resolution in sight.
 
A useful perspective comes from retired U.S. [[lieutenant general]] Harold G. Moore ([[U.S. Army]], retired) and journalist Joseph L. Galloway. Their book, ''We Were Soldiers once, and Young'', as well as the movie made about the subject, part of the [[Battle of the Ia Drang]], has been iconic, to many, of the American involvement. <ref name=Moore1999>{{Citation
| first1 = Harold G. (Hal) | last1 = Moore | first2 = Joseph L.  | last2 = Galloway
| title = We were Soldiers Once...and Young: Ia Drang - the Battle That Changed the War in Vietnam 
| publisher = Random House
| year = 1999}}</ref> Recently, they returned to their old battlefields and met with their old enemies, both sides seeking some closure. Some of their perspective may help.
 
== Second Section ==
 
Is it important to have a debate about the perspective and naming of the article in the article itself?  Couldn't this be its own article?  It seems to go with the most recent previous introduction.  Perhaps the two could be reunited as a separate debate-article on the nomenclature of the war? [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 00:57, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:For ...ahem... historical reasons here, there is far too much discussion of the naming. The part about the Museum in Hanoi, I believe, gives a good vignette of the other side, but my goal is simply to make it clear that there are multiple definitions of the war, and it wasn't as black-and-white as mass media make it. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 01:29, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::Fine, that's simply stated [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 02:06, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:Definitely get rid of the heading "Perspective and Naming", which I shall now do.  I also took out the paragraph <blockquote>Others discuss the [[Viet Minh]] resistance, in the colonial period, to the French and Japanese, and the successful Communist-backed overthrow of the post-partition southern government, as separate wars.  Unfortunately for naming convenience, there is a gap between the end of French rule and the start of partition in 1954, and the Northern decision to commit to controlling the South in 1959.  It also must be noted that there was a deliberate delay, for building up infrastructure, from that 1959 decision and the actual intensification of combat.</blockquote>
 
:No, without someone digging in his heels, there's no reason to argue the naming, but rather to state the point that the different sides saw it in different ways, and it can't just be defined in Cold War terms. I also took out the last sentence of the previous next-to-last paragraph,and combined the paragraphs. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 01:29, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
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::Okay, now this is more like it should be.  An introduction that gives an overview of the whole article.  It's not too long, covers all the points raised in the article and then moves right into the content with "background."  I like this. [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 02:09, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:::Great. Thanks to everyone. The old scar tissue has been removed. It would be good to see if the rest of this top-level article is at about the right level. I'm still trying to decide the ending date for "Wars of Vietnam", or, given the history of the area, not close the account.
 
:::There is a delicate balance between having enough U.S. politics to explain the context of involvement here, as opposed to the more specific article, [[War, Vietnam, and the United States]]. In like manner, I don't know if I moved too much into [[Government of South Vietnam]]; I think it's important for a reader not just to take the conventional wisdom that the GVN wasn't a popular government, but that at times, governments were lasting less than a month.
 
:::I'm working on the 1972-1975 period now, and also filling in a certain amount of geography (e.g., where the major highways run).  I'm not sure how much of that to do. Personally, I can visualize the general map, but there are times where I have to be reading while looking at a map. Someone new to the subject may just be overwhelmed by too many maps. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 02:22, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::::Without going into any ''ad hominem'' attacks (Ghad forbid!), I wonder how many articles that an Omnipotent Writer/Editor (such as, without naming names, a certain H*w*rd, who shall remain nameless), if he had limitless time, could rewrite in a major way, articles that a nameless former professorial contributor wrote in CZ, sometimes in excruciating length? [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 03:28, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:::::Purely hypothetically, of course, that's a question that I keep asking myself. In mundane life, I'm not a great housekeeper, but some things absolutely need a good scrubbing, airing, and polishing. Whether I'm willing to take on WWII is a question I keep asking myself.  I've nibbled at his edges, doing such things as writing [[radar]] to give background for the [[Battle of Britain]], which I then wrote. Until I got stuck on some of the typography for equations, I even took up Aleta's challenge that something wasn't rocket science, and wrote [[rocket science]].
 
:::::To take on some of those tasks, should I first indulge in a h*m*p*th*c remedy, in a flavored ethanol solution carrying a bit of water that won't forget?  Talisker flavoring, I think, or one of the older MacAllans. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 03:41, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
 
::::::Some things in life need to be reduced to their essentials. Tomorrow I'll put in a nice quote by [[Roger Angell]] about [[Martini]]s into the martini article. It is apropos of a lot of stuff here.... (In the meantime, I think I still have a bottle of Talisker that someone gave me.) [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 04:17, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:::::::So the utter essentials might be that a single dose of vermouth flavored gin is a Martinus, and an especially slim ballerina would wear a tu? [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 04:28, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
==Vietnam's Vietnam==
First, I think the date range now should be 1858 to 1999.  I've been digging into the post-1975 material, and the incidents among Vietnam, China, Cambodia, and Thailand just don't split on easy lines. Interestingly, the term '''Third Indochinese War''' is used quite a bit for this period. 1999 seems to be the date accepted for the last Khmer Rouge surrender; the starting date is a little blurry, as there was fighting between Khmer Rouge and Vietnamese Communists as early as 1973.
 
I must confess that I went into some giggling fits, reading about Vietnam going into Cambodia, and, for that matter, China into Vietnam, and thinking about all the legitimately wise observations of Vietnamese on ''really stupid'' U.S. assumptions.  Apparently, they don't read their own writing.  Cambodia became Vietnam's Vietnam, and on a lesser extent, Vietnam was China's Vietnam, both countries having committed many of the same errors as the U.S.
 
I've asked Larry if there's any stylistic preference, but what is the feeling about:
*Wars of Vietnam (1858-1999)
*Wars of Vietnam from 1858 to 1999
 
Whatever convention that is adopted here needs to be applied to other titles that contain dates; [[Joint warfare in South Vietnam 1964-1968]] is just not intuitive although it now has redirects.
 
As well as the giggles over Vietnam's Vietnam, if anyone is feeling masochistic, go keep track of the assorted Nguyens in [[Tet Offensive#Hue]]. Eventually, I had to draw a little chart.
 
If anyone would like to take on the pre-1858 wars, I have material in my sandbox, but I came to the conclusion that I definitely didn't have the references available for much of that period, other than the [[Trung Sisters]].
 
Anyway, there is a lot of filling in of details to do, but I'd appreciate it if everyone would look at the first-level headings in this article, as well as the names given to the articles to which they link.  It will be painful enough to change all the references to '''Vietnam War''', but if I don't, the Related Articles pages will be very ugly since the R-templates dislike redirects. I think there is a logical flow and the article names make sense, although I'm not wedded to any of them. Remember that some articles pertain to the same time period, such as [[Government of the Republic of Vietnam]] (well, mostly 1966-1968), [[Joint warfare in South Vietnam 1964-1968]] and at least [[Operation ROLLING THUNDER]].
 
There are various "helper" articles in early development, such as [[Vietnamese Buddhism]].
 
Perhaps we should activate the Military or History forums; I'd like some feedback on whether to develop this much further, or if there is interest in collaboration on other major topics such as the Second World War, or the intertwined but distinct (German) Nazi Party (and government), Holocaust, and National Socialism (and, for that matter, Fascism).
 
[[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 05:35, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
 
== More on naming ==
 
I've had some concerns expressed over the proposed renaming. Let me express what I think is a reasonable approach. The crux is that a desire was expressed that there be other than a redirect to (tentative) "Wars of Vietnam, 1858-1999" when a user requests "Vietnam War."
 
This was said in the context of
#"We generally go  with the term that most in currency among experts, and we also take into account usage of the public as well;"
#This is an English language encyclopedia and should reflect the Anglo-American understanding of things.
 
:I haven't the slightest objection to "Vietnam War" taking the user to a page that says something along the lines of (between dashed lines)
-------------------
:In the U.S., this term usually refers to the period in which U.S. forces were involved in warfare in what was the Republic of Vietnam (i.e., South Vietnam). The start and end of this period can be defined in several ways, but the most frequent is ground combat between 1964 and 1969. Alternative starting dates include:
:*The beginning of U.S. funding and training of South Vietnamese forces (1955)
:*The start of U.S. advisors and technical support being provided to combat operations, actually starting covertly in Laos in 1959, and overtly in Vietnam in 1961, with the first American killed in combat on December 22, 1961
 
:The ending date can variously be:
:*The exit of large U.S. ground combat units (1969)
:*The last U.S. air attacks (1972)
 
:To get details of the activity between these dates, see ''links to a list of more-specific articles''  Most historians and military analysts, however, put these activities in a broader context, beginning with the French conquest in 1858 and the rise of resistance against it, and ending with warfare by the forcibly unified [[Socialist Republic of Vietnam]] with Cambodia, China, and Thailand, ending in 1999.
-------------------
 
:To address the concerns, I'm not even sure that "Anglo-American", rather than "American", is accurate.
:<blockquote>On 21-22 September 1945, British Gurkhas, under MG Douglas Gracey, took the central prison back from the Japanese, releasing French paratroopers. Cedile, with those paratroopers, captured several Japanese-held police stations on the 22nd, and then took control of the administrative areas on the 23rd. Some Viet Minh guards were shot. French control was reasserted.</blockquote>
 
:For a still Western, but not necessarily English-speaking, one really must consider the French rule and the fighting against it. 1858 is a convenient date since that was the date of the French invasion, and there was resistance.  Serious nationalist resistance existed from 1930 on. From 1946 to 1954, there was increasing fighting with the French, up to large conventional warfare. As a result, French rule ended with the Geneva Accords in 1954.
 
:U.S. covert action began when [[Edward Lansdale]] arrived in 1954, and active U.S. support of the South Vietnamese military began in 1955.
 
:Anyway, can there be a consensus to have;
:#A '''Vietnam War''' page that both links to the combat and political events during U.S. involvement, and to a....
:#meta-article on '''Wars of Vietnam (dates)''' that include the colonization, resistance to French rule, the overt combat between the Viet Minh and French (1946-1954), South Vietnamese counterinsurgency up to the Gulf of Tonkin...and followed with the Vietnamese conflicts with Cambodia, China, and the little-known incursion into Thailand
 
Does this structure adequately address both the "common use/Anglo-American use" and broader military historian views? [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 19:44, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
 
: That seems to me to be an admirable solution. [[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 10:28, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
 
: I, too, think it works.  The thing we shouldn't lose is a page on the "Vietnam War" which should discuss the mid-twentieth-century conflict involving North and South Vietnam, France, the US and (to the extent that they influenced the war in Vietnam) Cambodia and Laos.  But this is no longer that article.  It may have started out as that article a long time ago, but it is now something else and the title should reflect the content, not the other way around.  Howard, you bring up a technology problem with the redirects that a page move would create.  This is a legitimate concern.  Would it be better just to cut and paste this content to [http://en.citizendium.org/wiki?title=Wars_of_Vietnam%2C_1858-1999&redirect=no Wars of Vietnam, 1858-1999] and stop the redirect?  All the [[Special:WhatLinksHere/Vietnam_War|Vietnam War Links]] (that's 354 links; I just counted them) probably reference the mid-century war so we wouldn't have to check all of them. [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 01:28, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
:::Gee, and I'm supposed to be the computer expert and know about simple redirects...yes, your cut-and-paste idea does make a great deal of sense. That will handle the bulk of the links, depending on the dates we select for the "mid-20th century" war.[[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 02:16, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
===Some cleanup to be done===
Let's start with the assumption that the series begins with the first Western involvement, although there actually was some French involvement in Emperor Gia Long taking power (one Nguyen dynasty overthrown by a different set of Nguyens) in 1802.  I can get away with a brief reference to the Trung Sisters in the 1st century CE, although they really are the starting point in defining the Sino-Vietnamese relationship.[[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 02:16, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 
I've looked at the starting date, and discover some overlaps between [[French Indochina]] and [[Indochina and the Second World War]].  French Indochina does start in 1858, but goes into WWII, which it really should not. Some things that are important, are not related to WWII, and are not covered as well as they should be, are the formation of the Indochinese Communist Party and some non-Communist nationalist groups, mostly starting about 1930.
 
The earliest date in Indochina & the 2nd WW is 1936 (from memory), when France started making explicit changes in anticipation of Japanese movements, which, to some extent, antagonized the nationalists even further. This article then runs through to the Japanese takeover from Vichy (March 1945), the Japanese surrender, and now to 1947, when there started to be serious combat with the Viet Minh. Alternatives would be to end it with the Japanese surrender, which gets messy with the reestablishment of French power over some months, or go out to September 2, 1946, when Ho declared independence.  I think the last makes the most sense.
 
The next article would be [[Indochinese revolution]], which could be from the independence day (still the national day) to the signing of the Geneva accords in mid-1954.  That, obviously, is where [[The Two Vietnams after Geneva]] starts. The endpoint is more difficult; it's a messy period. While the U.S. started funding and training in 1955, they didn't put in covert operations, and then starting in Laos, until 1959.  I will have to check if the first overt advisory function in combat was 1961 or 1962. North Vietnam made the policy decision to invade in May 1959, but I don't think they started significant construction of the Ho Chi Minh trail immediately.  It's not a firm call, but I tend to end the period in 1962, when U.S. support picked up significantly, and then run up to a really clear demarcation, the [[Gulf of Tonkin incident]][[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 02:16, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 
===Dates to use for '''Vietnam War''' proper?===
So what is the starting date of '''Vietnam  War'''?  I think it really has to be no earlier than mid-1954, because, at least since the French invasion, there was no entity called Vietnam. As a formal term, that was established by Emperor Gia Long in 1802, although, in general terms, it had been used before then.
 
So, 1954 is one possibility. The counterargument is that the decision, on both sides, to seek an armed solution didn't get made until the 1959-1961 range.
 
From a U.S.-standpoint, 1964 and the Gulf of Tonkin is easy, but I really prefer the start of the advisory buildup. Certainly, the [[Battle of Ap Bac]], in January 1963, is the point at which the U.S. press went into a feeding frenzy.
 
That leaves the choices as 1954, 1959, 1962 (maybe 1961), or, really U.S.-centric, 1964.
 
When do we end? There are several choices, more clear-cut than the start:
*1969 major pullout of U.S. ground forces
*1972 end of all U.S. air operations (December)
*1975 fall of South Vietnam and Vietnamese unification (my preference for "Vietnam War")
 
It gets blurrier after this:
*1978 Major Vietnamese invasion of Cambodia, although they had been skirmishing since 1973, good Communists all.
*1979 1st Chinese invasion, but that really isn't an endpoint, since Vietnam's Vietnam, Cambodia, went on for a number of years, and China invaded again in 1984.
*1991 UN peace treaty for Cambodia, with frequent violations
*1999 generally accepted date of last Khmer Rouge surrender.
 
What would your students assume, or am I ancient enough to think they really didn't think about it?  My vote would be '''1962-1975''', which I think establishes the distinctly U.S. major participation. Otherwise, even to call it Anglo-American, you have the anomaly of British action in 1945, and, for that matter, the U.S. consulted Britain in deciding NOT to intervene at [[Dien Bien Phu]]. This gets followed by '''Third Indochina War''', even though we never explicitly defined the First and Second; Third seems to be fairly popular in the literature about the all-Asian conflict after 1975.[[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 02:16, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:Okay, this is how I teach it: (1) Distinctions between Red River Delta society and Mekong River Delta society (one is relatively homogeneous; the other is really messed up [guess which one the US backs.]) (2) Biography of Ho Chi Minh to 1945 with emphasis on his US sojourn, ideas of national self-determination (from Wilson), Versailles, and then falling in with the Marxists, then as nominal US ally in WWII. (3) First French-Indochina War (yes, this is what I call it) with emphasis on US involvement (70% of the French military budget came from US aid; this was a US war from 1946); emphasis on US Cold War containment policy; and Geneva Accords (4) Ngo Government and the beginning of his consolidation of power; rise of popular (or VC-inspired) resistance; start of civil war in SVN; Buddhist revolt ==> Kennedy's backing for coup. (5) Johnson & McNamara looking for reason for escalation (they started doing this as early as March 1964); Gulf of Tonkin; Election of 1964 (Gulf of Tonkin was 3 Months before the election; if you've forgotten about it, LBJ didn't) (6) The escalation, quagmire, etc., etc., crumbling consensus, down to Tet, which breaks LBJ (The point here is that this is LBJ's war) (At this point I make a long detour into the anti-war movement, changes in civil liberties, counter-culture [sexanddrugsandrockandroll], the 1968 election in order to get us to ==>) (7) Nixon: de-escalation, "vietnamization," but then the Cambodian and Laotian incursions (Kent State); the Easter Campaign (failure of Vietnamization) and, finally, Paris Accords, then (8) the 1975 invasion and end of war.
:So, I teach it as a war for Vietnamese de-colonization and national unification.  Therefore "'''THE''' Vietnam War" starts in 1946 (the start of de-colonization) and ends in 1975 (national unification). It had some hot and cold moments, but it was the "Ten Thousand Day War." [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 04:28, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
::Aw, crap, Howard!  Now, I'm second guessing myself.  When Americans think of "'''THE''' Vietnam War" they think of US Army regulars, M-16s, HUEYs, Med-Evac, and the VC, anything that makes for a good movie, you know, Apocalypse Now.  So, that would be 1965-1973.  But, I think it was bigger than that.  Okay, so that was my poker hand, and now it's played.  Jones 04:37, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 
:::LOL...if it makes you feel better, I've never seen "Apocalypse Now".  I have, however, read pretty much everything from Hackworth, who seems to have been the model.
 
:::I still like the conceit of Cambodia being Vietnam's Vietnam, and Vietnam being China's Vietnam, except that the Chinese knew when to cut their losses.  As far as Cambodia, didn't anybody in the Politburo read Ho, Giap and Truong Chinh? [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 05:25, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 
===After edit conflict===
 
:I can certainly live with 1946-1975, although I suspect it will surprise some people.  That would give below the top-level article, to be named, both some chronological and some topical material.
 
:There are lots of more detailed articles below these, ranging from [[Battle of Vinh Yen]]/[[Battle of Na San]]/[[Dien Bien Phu]] (some topical things such as [[Roger Trinquier]]); many southern politicians and generals,[[Vietnam War Ground Technology]] and a more general [[Air assault]]; [[Battle of Ap Bac]], [[Operation ATTLEBORO]]/[[Operation JUNCTION CITY]]/][[ARC LIGHT]]/[[Operation CEDAR FALLS]] (but not every sweep), [[Battle of the Ia Drang]], [[Battle of Bong Son]], etc. If you have the time, there are some lower-level things, such as [[Battle of the Ia Drang]], that I'd like to put up for approval.
 
:'''Placeholder for pre-French''' eventually begin backfilling in "enclaves" such as the [[Trung Sisters]] and [[Tet Offensive#Hue|Le-Nguyen-Gia Long dynasties]]
 
:'''Wars of Vietnam, 1858-1999'''
:*Topical
:**Ho Chi Minh, certainly, and tie in with the evolving ''[[dau trinh]]'' theory articles; maybe some additional biographies. Some of this is in [[Indochinese revolution]]
:**[[VNQDD]], perhaps [[Vietnamese Buddhism]], [[Cao Dai]], [[Hoa Hao]], [[Binh Xuyen]]
:**[[Vietnam, war, and the United States]] complements the [[The Two Vietnams after Geneva‎]] from the political standpoint
:**[[Pacification in South Vietnam]]
:**[[Paris Peace Talks]]
:*Date-oriented
:**[[Indochinese revolution]] and [[Indochina and the Second World War]]. Have to decide where to break between them. The former definitely does not go up to the Second World War, but does pick up other nationalist things such as .  I still like starting the WWII article in the late thirties, where arguably WWII had started in China and France was starting to react. I picked 1936.
:**--------Start of "Vietnam War"-----------
:**Existing articles from 1946 on: [[Indochinese revolution]].
:**[[The Two Vietnams after Geneva‎]], [[U.S. support to South Vietnam before Gulf of Tonkin]], part of [[MACV-SOG]]. The extent to which they wanted to escalate is in several places, topical [[Vietnam, war, and the United States]], [[MACV-SOG]], and main article
:**[[Gulf of Tonkin incident]]; start of [[Air operations against North Vietnam]] and  [[Air campaigns against Cambodia and Laos]], [[Joint Warfare in South Vietnam 1964-1968]], [[Vietnamization]], [[South Vietnam's ground war, 1972-1975]], [[Fall of South Vietnam]]
:**---------End of "Vietnam War"-----------
:**Third Indochinese war, breaking things out of the existing main article
 
:Do we have a plan? Maybe move the existing [[Vietnam War/Related Articles]] to whatever the more general thing will be, and then rebuild [[Vietnam War/Related Articles]], with subheads under subtopics for date-oriented and topical?
 
:What is suggested for the overall 1858-1999, bearing in mind we may want to have a higher-level "Wars of Vietnam" that can deal with pre-French?  [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 05:11, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 
===OK, after you second-guessed===
You see the problem. Yes, it may be that the E-I-C has the Hueys (after UH-1) and M-16s in mind, not the earlier American H-21's and M-14s. Is even the 10,000 day model going to be too unexpected, without even touching the fact that the tooth fairy did not bring the French in 1946? [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 05:14, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 
===An aside===
Should the analysis above, and however we discuss it, become its own article? Not being a professional historian, would it qualify as "Historiography of the Wars of Vietnam"? [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 02:16, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 
== The broader perspective ==
 
Congratulations on the work of putting the subject into a realistic perspective. The earlier concept of a Vietnam war without Vietnamese was a curious aberration that seemed to violate the CZ principle of neutrality, and an appreciation  of the Vietnamese standpoint is scarcely possible without some knowledge of their history. It has always seemed to me that a valuable  function of historical analysis is to help us to learn from the mistakes and successes of our predecessors - whoever they are - and that to do that we have to try to put ourselves in their place and envisage their objectives and their means of pursuing them. Anything further anyone can contribute concerning Vietnamese (as well as French and American) decision-making, would add to the value of the article from that standpoint. [[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 10:23, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
 
== More Clean-up of the Introduction ==
 
I removed this paragraph
:In 1990, one of their visits included the Vietnam Historic Museum in Hanoi. <blockquote>The high point for us was not the exhibits but finding a huge mural that was both a timeline and a map of Vietnam's unhappy history dating back well over a thousand years...the Chinese section of the timeline stretched out for fifty feet or so. The section devoted to the French and their 150 years of colonial occupation was depicted in about twelve inches. The minuscule part that marked the U.S. war was only a couple of inches.<ref name=Moore2008>{{Citation
| first1 = Harold G. (Hal) | last1 = Moore | first2 = Joseph L.  | last2 = Galloway
| title = We are soldiers still: a journey back to the battlefields of Vietnam 
| publisher = Harper Collins
| year = 2008}}</ref></blockquote>
 
The problem with it that I find is that it has now lost its pronoun references.  Who is "us"?  Who is "their"?  I can't figure it out.  Anyway, the whole intro now lays out the argument of the article. [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 17:51, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

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OK, where do we go from here?

Oh Brave New World after the archiving, which has such wondrous things in it. Howard C. Berkowitz 21:01, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

keep reading friend.

Green Box

The green box at the top of the article adds some necessary context to this article, but there is a chronological gaffe. The box says "First Indochina War covers closely the anticolonial war against France, with interruptions for the events of the Second World War." But the First Indochina War starts after World War II. So how is that an "interruption?" Please fix.

Regarding the remainder of the box, isn't it possible to discuss these related articles on the Related Articles page? I think that it would make more sense. Russell D. Jones 21:12, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

This is a major second-level article for numerous articles about an extremely complex situation from 1962 to 1975. Vietnam wars covers the context of conflict between 1868 and 1999; there are separate articles on earlier history. There was anti-French activity, but the main First Indochina War came after the Second World War. This ends in 1975 with the fall of South Vietnam, but other wars continue in the Vietnam wars article.

Headings

I'm going to recommend also that the heading "Regional activity before South Vietnamese independence" find a shorter title so that the TOC isn't so wide. Russell D. Jones 21:12, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

First Section

The last sentence in the first paragraph should wrap up the lede, to wit, it should explain why the topic ends in 1975 (i.e., south vietnamese surrender). I'd also like to drop the reference to the first century conflict with China; it's just too far removed in time to be relevant. It could probably be mentioned paranthetically: "... but to a long history of Chinese attempts to control the region (going back to the first century)." "This article focuses on ..." I'm not a fan of self-referentiality. The famous photograph of the helicopter on the roof during the evacuation in 1975, I've heard was not the U.S. embassy itself. The paragraph dealing with weather is really out of place here. It's interesting and important information, but it seems out of place here. Last, the first section should also mention that the Vietnamese call this the "American War." Russell D. Jones 21:31, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Yes, I too read the other day that the evacuation was from a neighboring building. Maybe in an obit of the guy who took the photo? I think that's the source.... Hayford Peirce 21:59, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
We're all correct about the helicopters. Indeed, the most commonly used photograph is from a nearby CIA building, but there was also desperation at the Embassy and elsewhere.
Let me think about China; some reference is important.
I moved the weather to the beginning of large-scale combat. Howard C. Berkowitz 22:04, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
Long time coming.... I've reworked this whole section into a lede and an "overview" section. Russell D. Jones 21:40, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
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