First (instructor) evaluation comments
Here are some suggestions for further improvements to your encyclopedia entry draft. I'm going to stick to the sections you've already begun developing, but keepin mind that you still need to fill in the others as well as the required subpages.
- The "History" section looks like it's off to a good start, though you might develop it further with additional subsections in which you chronicle the organization's development since the early 1980s.
- The "Current objectives and activities" section seems a bit list-like; you should be aiming for a more essay style format. You should also avoid lifting text directly from the Federalist Society's website; explanations should be in your own words.
- It's not clear who awards the Bradley Prize; you might work on clarifying that in the "Achievements" section.
Shamira Gelbman 03:04, 8 October 2009 (UTC)
- Do search (Search, not Go) for "Federalist Society" in CZ. You might find some resources. Howard C. Berkowitz 03:20, 8 October 2009 (UTC)