Talk:Dreamcast

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 Definition A sixth generation videogame console released by Sega in 1998 in Japan and 1999 in North America and Europe. [d] [e]

This needs heavy revisioning. --Robert W King 17:48, 6 July 2008 (CDT)

No kidding. I knew it was from Wikipedia before I even got past the first paragraph: sentences 2, 3, 4, and 5 all begin with the same two words: "It was..." Who's going to pick up the reins and be a revisionary? --Joe Quick 17:53, 6 July 2008 (CDT)
I want to, but argh, I don't have the inclination to do a lot of console research to write it. What it needs is a video game console historian, or at least someone to come in here and not have it full of bad grammar. I nominate you, Joe! --Robert W King 17:58, 6 July 2008 (CDT)

Not pleased

I will take the time to rewrite this article this coming week, but until then I can't simply let it stand in its current state. It is a black eye and I think most people would expect more of us. --Robert W King 23:28, 11 July 2008 (CDT)

You could have just asked me to fix it, the only thing taken from Wikipedia was the hardware part, since I was working on that section at Wikipedia for some time now. Everything else is my own work, I will start work on it in the coming days.

Nearly a year later and it's being worked on. :p --Mehar Gill 22:22, 31 July 2009 (UTC)