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imported>Bruno L'Astorina (New page: {{subpages}} ==General== I attempt to write an introduction that attempt to the origin of astrology, your initial proeminency and, after, your fall in descredit. It is necessary still wr...) |
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I attempt to write an introduction that attempt to the origin of astrology, your initial proeminency and, after, your fall in descredit. It is necessary still write mor about astrology itself, your structure and different branches. | I attempt to write an introduction that attempt to the origin of astrology, your initial proeminency and, after, your fall in descredit. It is necessary still write mor about astrology itself, your structure and different branches. | ||
--[[User:Bruno L'Astorina|L'Astorina]] 13:26, 02 October 2007 (CST) | --[[User:Bruno L'Astorina|L'Astorina]] 13:26, 02 October 2007 (CST) | ||
::Hi Astorina, I've fixed some but not all of the language problems with the article. I take it, that English is not your native language? | |||
::In many places, the wording and sentence structure are not clear. If you are still active on this article, leave me a note here, and I will suggest more extensive changes and development of the article. [[User:James Davis|James Davis]] 20:29, 29 October 2007 (CDT) | |||
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General
I attempt to write an introduction that attempt to the origin of astrology, your initial proeminency and, after, your fall in descredit. It is necessary still write mor about astrology itself, your structure and different branches. --L'Astorina 13:26, 02 October 2007 (CST)
- Hi Astorina, I've fixed some but not all of the language problems with the article. I take it, that English is not your native language?
- In many places, the wording and sentence structure are not clear. If you are still active on this article, leave me a note here, and I will suggest more extensive changes and development of the article. James Davis 20:29, 29 October 2007 (CDT)