Talk:Systems theory (disambiguation)
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First draft
I took a early copy of the Wikipedia article (Most of which had been subsequently deleted by wikipedians in the present article)which was edited and approved by Marcus Schwaninger, Alex Laszlo, Doug Walton and I, and placed it here. Several additions and revisions were then made here by me. Alex Laszlo wrote "Nice, but you left out a word" Matthew Shapiro questions the significance of placing ISSS in the second paragraph. I agree about the ISSS, but want to place how systems began there.
I tend to think that the formulation of systems theory as a authentic science was accomplished by Ludwig von Bertalanffy, generally regarded as the father of General Systems Theory, which systems theory is derived from. Elsewhere, it was mentioned that a general system theory was conceived of by at least two authors prior to von Bertalanffy's contribution. As far as I can tell, almost everyone in ISSS considers Bertalanffy et al, as the founder. Especially in light of his publication of his book General Systems Theory. Thomas Mandel 22:20, 5 June 2007 (CDT)
- Subsequently I have removed all previous Wikipedia content, Thomas Mandel 21:54, 7 June 2007 (CDT)
Format
This article is currently looking like a mess and needs reformatting. Yi Zhe Wu 18:03, 6 June 2007 (CDT)
- I just started. Thanks for the right thumb. Thomas Mandel 20:48, 6 June 2007 (CDT)
- I read on your user page that you are a high school student interested in literature, history and law. what is your experience with "formatting" and can you be more specific about the kind of formatting you are talking about? Can you help me with formatting the lists at the end of the article? I don't know how to do that right. Thomas Mandel 21:16, 6 June 2007 (CDT)
- I was talking about the Wiki markup and the section headings, not the substantive formatting of the article. Sorry for the confusion. When I first spotted the article, there was no section headings, but now it is a lot better. For lists, the * (asterisk) is the bullet. I just used this way to format the external link section. Thanks! Yi Zhe Wu 23:02, 6 June 2007 (CDT)
- Glad to meet you. I sure can use help with the wiki formatting. I figured the astric opps astrisk, out and made some changes myself. Are you familair with Chinese philosophy. I know it is not a philosophy but you know what I mean. I need to learn how to do references next.Thomas Mandel 01:02, 7 June 2007 (CDT)
- Well, I know a little bit of Chinese philosophy, like the basics of Confucianism and such ("confusion"ism :-) ) but not in depth. For references, put <ref>text you want to put in reference</ref> and then in the end of the article add a reference section header and under that insert {{reflist}}. Regards. Yi Zhe Wu 15:33, 8 June 2007 (CDT)
- Glad to meet you. I sure can use help with the wiki formatting. I figured the astric opps astrisk, out and made some changes myself. Are you familair with Chinese philosophy. I know it is not a philosophy but you know what I mean. I need to learn how to do references next.Thomas Mandel 01:02, 7 June 2007 (CDT)
- I was talking about the Wiki markup and the section headings, not the substantive formatting of the article. Sorry for the confusion. When I first spotted the article, there was no section headings, but now it is a lot better. For lists, the * (asterisk) is the bullet. I just used this way to format the external link section. Thanks! Yi Zhe Wu 23:02, 6 June 2007 (CDT)
- I read on your user page that you are a high school student interested in literature, history and law. what is your experience with "formatting" and can you be more specific about the kind of formatting you are talking about? Can you help me with formatting the lists at the end of the article? I don't know how to do that right. Thomas Mandel 21:16, 6 June 2007 (CDT)
Reviewed
Alexander Laszlo: "Nice, except the Glossary entry for Evolutionary Systems Design is listed as Evolutionary Systems (i.e., there's a word missing)."
Bela A. Banathy: "Tom ... NEAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ..... keep me in the loop ...
Jieranai Maier: "Well Congratulations! Great Job Well Done Thomas!"
Wikipedia credit?
An earlier version of the article came from WP, didn't it? Is there some reason we aren't checking the "Content is from Wikipedia?" box? --Larry Sanger 02:44, 7 June 2007 (CDT)
- All wikipedia content has been removed/revised with the exception of the lists at the bottom. If necessary I can remove those too. Thomas Mandel 07:48, 7 June 2007 (CDT)
Big issues here
I searched the major electronic resources of a large well-funded university to discover what I could about this topic. I found next to nothing, an article or two about Bertalanffy and an ebook or two on the topic that one can find by searching amazon with the term. Also, the field of engineering apparently has a System theory that differs from this topic. I searched with Margaret Mead Systems Theory and found nothing. I Googled those terms just out of curiosity, too, and found a few things from an advocacy perspective that essentially just make an bald assertion about the matter, plus WP's article and CZ's article mentioning it[1], (this article shows in Google page 2 with what it used to say, "Margaret Mead and Gregory Bateson also had extensive dialogue to discuss transdisciplinary principles of systems theory, such as positive and negative feedback, into the social sciences."). As a student of anthropology and as one with respect for Mead, I find this very troubling, to put it mildly. Propagandists use a technique called transfer technique in which they attempt to get you to believe an idea you are NOT familiar with by referencing something or someone you ARE familiar with in an attempt to get you to transfer the legitimacy of the thing or person you are familiar with to the thing you are not. That appears to be going on here through eliciting Mead.
I'd be inclined to begin an article about Systems Theory something like this:
Systems theory refers to a body of thought and way of thinking held among a small minority of thinkers across various disciplines. Systems theory primarily traces itself to a work by biologist Ludwig von Bertalanffy, General System Theory, in which he sought to bring under one philosophical heading his thoughts about organismic structures. Bertalanffy argued [fill in core argument]. Adherents of system theory have gone on to apply Bertalanffy's thought to [fill in details]. Adherents today often find home for their ideas within the movement's organizing body, the International Society for the System Sciences (ISSS)....
Just a quick sketch, of course, but it gets across the gist of the idea. As this article reads now, it seems to scream of advocacy with CZ as its platform. I do not at all think this represents a neutral, scholarly encyclopedia article about the topic. It actually reminds me almost "to the T" of what CZ once had at Heterodox economics.
Stephen Ewen 04:46, 11 June 2007 (CDT)
- Do you mean that you actually read the Wikipedia article???? Mead is not mentioned in that fashion in our article. Doesn't the very partial list of books referenced in the further reading section count? Laszlo alone has written over eighty books. Your introduction is biased with your opinions. Does it matter if those opinions are right or wrong? All science at one time was held by a minority. The "home" of the movement is the IFSR with numerious members one of which is ISSS with thirty chapters arond the world. Systemics is used in all fields, and it is sad that those who have preempted our core principles choose not to give credit where credit is due. An encyclopedia is supposed to inform the reader and in this case well-funded Universities. Do you have access to an expert in systems theory?
What you are defining is what we call the systems movement. Here Klir writes in the International Encyclopedia of Systems and Cybernetics. p 361, Systems Movement - "A loose assciation of worldwide scale of people from different disciplines of science, engineering. philosophy and other areas, who share a common interest in ideas (concepts, principles, methods,, etc.,that are applicable to all systems and that, consequencly transcend the boundaries of traditional science.
That how we write an encyclopedia.
In short, your lack of knowledge about the subject really should not be an influence in the article, don't you think? It is extremely difficult to argue a point with someone who needs to be instructed about every aspect of what is being said. Isn't the goal to describe what is out there rather than what we happen to think what is out there? And, am I stepping out of bounds by making these arguments?
- "The International Encyclopedia of Systems and Cybernetics" is described as "a sort of self-referential work of reference".[2] I think this screams that my suggested intro and earlier comments are right on mark. I suggest you may have significant difficulty determining advocacy from neutrality and what would comprise a balanced encyclopedia article in this case. Stephen Ewen 14:29, 11 June 2007 (CDT)
Article checklist
Could someone please fill out the article checklist on this article. We need to determine editorship of this article. --Matt Innis (Talk) 14:32, 11 June 2007 (CDT)
Considering the founder's background, and in lieu of anything broader, I think Biology and Philosophy. --Larry Sanger 14:45, 11 June 2007 (CDT)