Talk:Systems theory (disambiguation)

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First draft

I took a early copy of the Wikipedia article (Most of which had been subsequently deleted by wikipedians in the present article)which was edited and approved by Marcus Schwaninger, Alex Laszlo, Doug Walton and I, and placed it here. Several additions and revisions were then made here by me. Alex Laszlo wrote "Nice, but you left out a word" Matthew Shapiro questions the significance of placing ISSS in the second paragraph. I agree about the ISSS, but want to place how systems began there.

I tend to think that the formulation of systems theory as a authentic science was accomplished by Ludwig von Bertalanffy, generally regarded as the father of General Systems Theory, which systems theory is derived from. Elsewhere, it was mentioned that a general system theory was conceived of by at least two authors prior to von Bertalanffy's contribution. As far as I can tell, almost everyone in ISSS considers Bertalanffy et al, as the founder. Especially in light of his publication of his book General Systems Theory. Thomas Mandel 22:20, 5 June 2007 (CDT)

Subsequently I have removed all previous Wikipedia content, Thomas Mandel 21:54, 7 June 2007 (CDT)

Format

This article is currently looking like a mess and needs reformatting. Yi Zhe Wu 18:03, 6 June 2007 (CDT)

I just started. Thanks for the right thumb. Thomas Mandel 20:48, 6 June 2007 (CDT)

I read on your user page that you are a high school student interested in literature, history and law. what is your experience with "formatting" and can you be more specific about the kind of formatting you are talking about? Can you help me with formatting the lists at the end of the article? I don't know how to do that right. Thomas Mandel 21:16, 6 June 2007 (CDT)

I was talking about the Wiki markup and the section headings, not the substantive formatting of the article. Sorry for the confusion. When I first spotted the article, there was no section headings, but now it is a lot better. For lists, the * (asterisk) is the bullet. I just used this way to format the external link section. Thanks! Yi Zhe Wu 23:02, 6 June 2007 (CDT)

Glad to meet you. I sure can use help with the wiki formatting. I figured the astric opps astrisk, out and made some changes myself. Are you familair with Chinese philosophy. I know it is not a philosophy but you know what I mean. I need to learn how to do references next.Thomas Mandel 01:02, 7 June 2007 (CDT)

Well, I know a little bit of Chinese philosophy, like the basics of Confucianism and such ("confusion"ism :-) ) but not in depth. For references, put <ref>text you want to put in reference</ref> and then in the end of the article add a reference section header and under that insert {{reflist}}. Regards. Yi Zhe Wu 15:33, 8 June 2007 (CDT)

Reviewed

Alexander Laszlo: "Nice, except the Glossary entry for Evolutionary Systems Design is listed as Evolutionary Systems (i.e., there's a word missing)."

Bela A. Banathy: "Tom ... NEAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ..... keep me in the loop ...

Jieranai Maier: "Well Congratulations! Great Job Well Done Thomas!"

Wikipedia credit?

An earlier version of the article came from WP, didn't it? Is there some reason we aren't checking the "Content is from Wikipedia?" box? --Larry Sanger 02:44, 7 June 2007 (CDT)

All wikipedia content has been removed/revised with the exception of the lists at the bottom. If necessary I can remove those too. Thomas Mandel 07:48, 7 June 2007 (CDT)

Big issues here

I scoured the entire resources available to me through the library of a large well-funded university to discover what I could about this topic. I found next to nothing, an article or two about Bertalanffy and an ebook or two on the topic that one can find by searching amazon with the term. It was also a bit frustrating because the field of engineering apparently has a System theory that differs from this topic. I searched with Margaret Mead Systems Theory and found nothing. I Googled those terms just out of curiosity, too, and found only WP's article and CZ's article mentioning it[1], (this article used to say "Margaret Mead and Gregory Bateson also had extensive dialogue to discuss transdisciplinary principles of systems theory, such as positive and negative feedback, into the social sciences." As a student of anthropology and as one with respect for Mead, I find this very troubling, to put it mildly.

I'd be inclined to begin an article about Systems Theory something like this:

Systems theory refers to a body of thought and way of thinking held among a small minority of thinkers across various disciplines. Systems theory primarily traces itself to a work by biologist Ludwig von Bertalanffy, General System Theory, in which he sought to bring under one heading the organismic structures that he had observed in his work as a biologist. Bertalanffy argued [fill in core argument]. Adherents of system theory have gone on to apply Bertalanffy's thought to [fill in details]....

Just a quick sketch, of course, but it gets across the gist of the idea. As this article reads now, it seems to scream of advocacy more than a neutral, scholarly encyclopedia article about the topic. It reminds me of what CZ once had at Heterodox economics.

Stephen Ewen 04:46, 11 June 2007 (CDT)