Osama bin Laden: Revision history

8 May 2011

• curprev 09:2509:25, 8 May 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 47,434 bytes +3‎ →‎The raid
• curprev 09:2009:20, 8 May 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 47,431 bytes +2,006‎ No edit summary
• curprev 09:1809:18, 8 May 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 47,433 bytes +1,928‎ SEALS link
• curprev 09:1809:18, 8 May 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 47,405 bytes +1,900‎ →‎The raid: Removed sexist language and added back details.
• curprev 09:1509:15, 8 May 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 46,546 bytes 0‎ →‎The raid
• curprev 09:0709:07, 8 May 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 46,546 bytes +1,041‎ tense
• curprev 09:0309:03, 8 May 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 46,545 bytes +1,040‎ →‎The raid: Copy edits; adding back about navy SEALS breaching the wall will add back source
• curprev 09:0309:03, 8 May 2011‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 46,554 bytes +1,049‎ Interim quote about succession and effects, will expand
• curprev 08:3508:35, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ m 45,505 bytes +80‎ →‎The Raid: caps don't fit format of other headers
• curprev 08:3208:32, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ m 45,505 bytes +80‎ identify column
• curprev 08:2708:27, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ m 45,467 bytes +46‎ →‎Death: shorten sentence
• curprev 08:2608:26, 8 May 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ 45,498 bytes −7‎ simplify lead + comma
• curprev 08:1908:19, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 45,505 bytes +84‎ url
• curprev 08:1208:12, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ m 45,421 bytes −4‎ repeated word
• curprev 08:0808:08, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ m 45,425 bytes +9,770‎ →‎Quotes of comments: typo
• curprev 08:0608:06, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ m 45,424 bytes +5,247‎ add some links to Clarke
• curprev 07:5107:51, 8 May 2011‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 44,894 bytes +1,521‎ Sourcing death comments, moving possibly valid but unsourced comments to talk page
• curprev 07:4407:44, 8 May 2011‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 44,431 bytes +1,058‎ →‎Death
• curprev 07:1307:13, 8 May 2011‎ imported>Peter Schmitt‎ 43,373 bytes +1,180‎ →‎Death: adding a brief account on the mission and the reactions
• curprev 05:3605:36, 8 May 2011‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 42,193 bytes +195‎ No edit summary
• curprev 05:2905:29, 8 May 2011‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 41,998 bytes +813‎ Reference cleanup, added details
• curprev 03:3503:35, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ m 41,185 bytes +1,008‎ repeated word typo
• curprev 03:3003:30, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 41,196 bytes +40‎ →‎Death: link
• curprev 03:2103:21, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 41,192 bytes +36‎ →‎Death: wording
• curprev 03:1803:18, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ m 41,195 bytes +39‎ link
• curprev 03:0703:07, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 41,156 bytes +979‎ →‎Death: footnote digression
• curprev 03:0303:03, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 41,236 bytes +410‎ →‎Death: more background, source
• curprev 02:4802:48, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ m 40,827 bytes +1‎ →‎Death: typo
• curprev 02:2302:23, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 40,826 bytes +649‎ →‎Death: space; paragraph
• curprev 02:2002:20, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 40,818 bytes +641‎ →‎Death: spike the football
• curprev 01:4101:41, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 40,177 bytes +1,782‎ fix links
• curprev 01:3401:34, 8 May 2011‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 40,147 bytes +676‎ →‎Death: add counterpoint and sources

7 May 2011

• curprev 23:5623:56, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 39,471 bytes +1,076‎ →‎Death: recast a couple sentences
• curprev 23:5223:52, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Sandy Harris‎ 39,432 bytes +3‎ →‎Theory and authority
• curprev 23:4923:49, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Sandy Harris‎ 39,429 bytes +958‎ rewrite lede
• curprev 19:4019:40, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 38,951 bytes +36‎ →‎Death: war on terrorism
• curprev 19:3619:36, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 38,915 bytes +444‎ →‎Death: Added back Bush with details of his implementtion for the hunt for bin Laden
• curprev 19:2819:28, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Sandy Harris‎ 37,929 bytes +290‎ →‎Return to Afghanistan: Masoud, in right place this time
• curprev 19:2619:26, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Sandy Harris‎ 37,931 bytes +292‎ →‎Return to Afghanistan: Masoud
• curprev 19:2419:24, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Sandy Harris‎ 37,639 bytes −127‎ →‎The attacks of 9-11: move Masoud
• curprev 19:2219:22, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Sandy Harris‎ 37,930 bytes +164‎ →‎Capture or killing
• curprev 19:2019:20, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Sandy Harris‎ 37,766 bytes −705‎ full name & - image to move
• curprev 19:1719:17, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Sandy Harris‎ 37,883 bytes +49‎ add Arabic
• curprev 17:1817:18, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 37,834 bytes −637‎ improved syntax
• curprev 15:2615:26, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Peter Schmitt‎ 37,825 bytes −646‎ →‎Death: removing Bush quote -- there have been much more relevant statements / the whole section needs thorough revision
• curprev 12:5112:51, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 38,471 bytes +1‎ null -- Ro, could you turn your attention to the second paragraph? It clearly needs revision....
• curprev 07:1007:10, 7 May 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 38,470 bytes +75‎ shorten heading to remove clutter at top of article\→‎Plans for another September 11 attack discussed by al-Qaeda members

6 May 2011

• curprev 22:2522:25, 6 May 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 38,531 bytes +165‎ now that Martin is now longer here to present his dicta, I have restored the lede verb from "is" to "was". Look, for instance, at the "Winston Churchill" article - it is PAST, not present tense....
• curprev 21:1121:11, 6 May 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 38,530 bytes 0‎ No edit summary
• curprev 21:1121:11, 6 May 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 38,530 bytes +164‎ No edit summary