User:Hayford Peirce/Sandbox

Skirrow

It won't etc.

moments of longeur towards the middle-end, chapters so-and-so, and then it picks up again

Folliwng this girl

longeurs until about page so-and-so, with minor action, until he goes to the countryside and meets Satan Smith, then a fair amount of action, although some tedium. more anti-gay stuff

Try to give

same stuff as in #1, the lift people catch him, take im to the basement, he beats them up/or their boss

lots and lots of tedious adverting talk tedium -- in small does in #1 very good, in #2 and #3 increasingly bad

mentions the Frug, so it was probably written after the others, but hard to believe. a very inconsequential plot

also, in #1, "Im trying to give her up"